Reviews for Smile, Empty Soul
BenSolo'sGirlfriend chapter 8 . 7/30
This chapter was a bitch to write?
Well, this chapter was a bitch to read!
But, it got lots of emotion oozing out of my heart, so keep up the good work!
otakugomi-chan chapter 5 . 6/9
I'm a little confused, because earlier in the book she was worried, then called him a loser, and is his friend again?
OrangeJellyfish chapter 4 . 2/12
Naru-chan... ;-;
Guest chapter 2 . 2/12
Awww...the ending made me sad ;-;
kuroko-fangirl chapter 14 . 2/3
i was super happy when narutos dad wasn't minato. i really love minato and i dont think i would have been able to look at him the same again. so thx for making up Yon to be narutos father.
DemonicWhispers chapter 14 . 1/20
This was a really good fanfic; I really enjoyed reading it and I'm glad Sasuke wasn't emo!
theisticSantaist chapter 3 . 1/12
Hey so just thought I'd leave some notes for things that I think could have gone better in the story
because you point out something was obvious or maybe even lame doesn't make it any less..lame(ex:when Narutos Dad Yan kidnaped Naruto(around there)you even said right after how unsurprised you where and that you didn't blame your readers for not being surprised
can't explain what's happening in the end of an author's note I mean it doesn't work like that when your telling us something that's supposed to be shown in story because the authors notes are not suppose to be essential to the story unless they are then their not really author notes
ending had a time skip maybe you thought there needed to be time for Naruto to get other stuff before dating susake or something but I have to assume because I didn't get that from the story idk I could be wrong I'm just saying anyways it was cool you write alot in a short amount of time,cool
kriselfantasy chapter 4 . 11/29/2015
pssstttt...u can write the graphic stuff as long as u put proper ratings and warnings. just saying. btw really good story brah:D :3
janeladero chapter 14 . 10/19/2015
i so love your fanfic stories of sasunaru... 3 great job author (*thumbs up!)
LeafTwin1 chapter 14 . 10/11/2015
This was a brilliant story. I love all the funny moments (there's too many to name and I'm liable to forget some) and I love how everyone has their bloodline limits and that they can see Kyuubi and the adults (the teachers and nurse and Itachi) couldn't care less that Naruto has the Kyuubi in him (aside from some fear it'll take over) and care about him. You're a terrific author and I am so happy my twin sent you're wonderful story to me. I know I'll be reading it again and again. Cheers and at!(_) Just a really brilliant story all around.
Guest chapter 14 . 9/10/2015
Sooooo great! Eeeeee
Guest chapter 13 . 9/10/2015
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeee why is there only one more chapter
MIA chapter 14 . 7/8/2015
Loved it you are da boss you rule.
Guest chapter 6 . 3/17/2015
COOKIES! Cookies everywhere everyone! Cookies will rule the world!
Guest chapter 4 . 3/17/2015
T-T Naruto! T-T Like the story. T-T
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