Reviews for Smile, Empty Soul
ShipMasterMagic666 chapter 11 . 4/1/2017
The Uchiha crest is a fan
ShipMasterMagic666 chapter 7 . 4/1/2017
Ero-sennin means pervy sage
Minatoxkushinaxnaruto chapter 14 . 3/15/2017
Nice story ,if there wasn't those cringe scenes ~~
Guest chapter 4 . 3/13/2017
...Not random...? What do you mean..?
Ladia chapter 11 . 10/4/2016
Omg i love itachis mornings lmao, and how i discribe there crest is like a pokemon ball... That what i thought it was the 1st time lol
Ladia chapter 2 . 10/4/2016
AWSOME!️️
Alexa chapter 14 . 9/4/2016
Great story! Hooked on it!
BenSolo'sGirlfriend chapter 8 . 7/30/2016
This chapter was a bitch to write?
Well, this chapter was a bitch to read!
But, it got lots of emotion oozing out of my heart, so keep up the good work!
otakugomi-chan chapter 5 . 6/9/2016
I'm a little confused, because earlier in the book she was worried, then called him a loser, and is his friend again?
OrangeJellyfish chapter 4 . 2/12/2016
Naru-chan... ;-;
Guest chapter 2 . 2/12/2016
Awww...the ending made me sad ;-;
kuroko-fangirl chapter 14 . 2/3/2016
i was super happy when narutos dad wasn't minato. i really love minato and i dont think i would have been able to look at him the same again. so thx for making up Yon to be narutos father.
DemonicWhispers chapter 14 . 1/20/2016
This was a really good fanfic; I really enjoyed reading it and I'm glad Sasuke wasn't emo!
theisticSantaist chapter 3 . 1/12/2016
Hey so just thought I'd leave some notes for things that I think could have gone better in the story
because you point out something was obvious or maybe even lame doesn't make it any less..lame(ex:when Narutos Dad Yan kidnaped Naruto(around there)you even said right after how unsurprised you where and that you didn't blame your readers for not being surprised
can't explain what's happening in the end of an author's note I mean it doesn't work like that when your telling us something that's supposed to be shown in story because the authors notes are not suppose to be essential to the story unless they are then their not really author notes
ending had a time skip maybe you thought there needed to be time for Naruto to get other stuff before dating susake or something but I have to assume because I didn't get that from the story idk I could be wrong I'm just saying anyways it was cool you write alot in a short amount of time,cool
krisel chapter 4 . 11/29/2015
pssstttt...u can write the graphic stuff as long as u put proper ratings and warnings. just saying. btw really good story brah:D :3
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