Reviews for Aelita's Hero |
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Ginsenshi chapter 5 . 7/2/2004 Yes! Good chapter 5 Jeff, loved it, loved it! Finish up the next chapter or your 'so' dead. If Aelita dead your dead. Hahahhaha Just kidding but really finish this 'great' story up now.. GO! Ja Mata, Ginsenshi |
Kawaii34girl chapter 5 . 7/2/2004 Aelita is... gone? O_o HOW COULD YOU! O-well, I'm sure the next chapter or 2 will have somthing interesting going on. SO UP-DATE SOON! Kawaii34Girl ...because 3/4 r cute. |
Mr.Evil chapter 5 . 7/2/2004 B e a utiful, he had to destroy the one he loved i dont know if this can get any better but knowing you it will i cant wait for the next chapter |
MrsAnonymous chapter 5 . 7/2/2004 That was so good. I was crying. I'm still crying now. Update soon. I must know where this is going. |
amazing platypus chapter 5 . 7/2/2004 just so u know im die xana and i hope you take the rest of my idea and have her come back to life . just for a hint on an idea ppl get stronger when there mad its true. |
firehair-222 chapter 4 . 7/1/2004 I was going to tell u that od starts out with 10 arrows but it looks like everyone else did. Your stories okay, but im confused. why did Jeremy bring friends and Xana use monsters? Im surprised at Jeremy for putting his 'princesses' life on the line like that. In some parts your story is a little unclear. You are good at fighting sceens so far. You know at the bottom how you said, 'this story was small and boring', never put your story down. If you say its not great, what reason do people have not to believe you? and its not true, that chapter was good. I cant wait for the next one. -firehair |
die xana chapter 4 . 6/30/2004 i know this sounds crazy but you should have aelita die. Dont kill me please then jeramie will try to bring her back and wait scratch that whole idea thats MINE. take it if you want it but i might write my own like that. it will be the first where aelita dies. but let her come back so you guys dont hunt me down. |
must read more chapter 4 . 6/30/2004 NO MORE CLIFFYS PLEASE THIS IS EVEN MORE SUSPENSFUL THAN THAT ONE FIC. SORRY FOR MY YELLING! |
Mr.Evil chapter 4 . 6/27/2004 I dont get it i thought there would be no friends or monsters well good chapter and i cant wait to find out what evil Xana has stooped to P.S. its ten arrows |
tsucasa chapter 4 . 6/25/2004 the first four chapters were exelant I cant wait to read the next chapter. you sould see if you can make these actuall episodes. p.s.: odd starts with 10 laser arrows |
Trake chapter 4 . 6/24/2004 Woot! I have been lazy and sick, so I missed reviewing the passed two chaps. Sorry! I wonder how well Jeremy will fair against Xana. Also, Odd has ten arrows, but twenty works too. Anywho, great chap, update soon. -Cheese is still good! P.S. SMJ allowed me to use some of this space to advertise, so I'm hoping people who read this review will read Xana's Unexpected Allies by me and review. I changed it so that when I get 14 review I'll update, so work quick! |
The capricorn earth dragon chapter 4 . 6/24/2004 nice and odd startes out with ten arrows |
Georgia Peach chapter 4 . 6/23/2004 *gasp* the suspense! lol. very cool so far! keep going please :) |
Story Weaver1 chapter 4 . 6/23/2004 Pretty good chapter. I can't wait to see Jeremy and Xana gong head to head. |
MrsAnonymous chapter 4 . 6/23/2004 You stole my idea of having X.A.N.A. make a human body. Not trying to flame. Good anyways. Update soon. |