Reviews for Reality
Raven34link chapter 1 . 9/23/2010
ohhh do more
elvira chapter 1 . 5/27/2007
will you finch yht story or can i rite it send a e-mail to me ok...
ME chapter 1 . 10/25/2004
pixie r u going to write more?

i think u should please
N chapter 1 . 10/21/2004
the point being it is good

please write more
ME chapter 1 . 10/18/2004
LOL!

please write more

it looks so funny
Corrinth chapter 1 . 6/18/2004
The point being...?

Wise up. Put a little (or a lot) of description into your chapters, bulk it out a little bit. If I hadn't read the summary (point taken that this is what summaries are for but...) I wouldn't know who's POV this is. And is the language necessary? It's not very Rogue is it? She's too innocent for that! (Like the others, just friendly advice, feel free to ignore!)

Okay... on the positive side, the whole triangle thing intrigues me. How on Earth did this all come about? And if she knows that he knows, or thinks that he doesn't know... well you get my drift - you could have much fun with this!

Alex

(Corrinth)
GrimSage chapter 1 . 6/13/2004
Very apropriate title. I like this one. Sort of a 'balancing the scales' thing.

Plus, the subtle mindset of denial between everyone? Very nice touch.
jupiterhime chapter 1 . 6/13/2004
You have great ideas and write really well, but your chapters/story are also extremely short. Try longer chapters and youll get more people reading your stories. Just some friendly advice.
lily chapter 1 . 6/12/2004
More... Slap that jean around et Scott and rouge have there fun and make logan realize what he is missing... Damn x-man 2 for not playing uop more of logan and rouge..