Please update faster! Haha I Love this story keep it up!

Loved this chapter! I cannot wait to see what happens :)

Update please ! Thanks!

I really enjoy your writing style it's very intriguing. I like how you have Link and Zelda speak more midevalish and politer how one would speak in the time period. The "rapping at my chamber door" made me laugh as I noticed you were making reference to the Raven.

It's incredible. Someone who's actually really, really good at this. Definitely worthy of an award, and I've only read the first chapter.

Hello! I've been a huge fan of yours in the past, and am now with a new account. I'm trying to build up my past archive of favorites again. Thanks for your contributions to this awesome site, and I will review more later!

Hope you write more... I had never read something like this. Quite interesting :D

This is truly impressive work. Everything is in its right proportions, and your talent is simply astounding. I wish I could write like you do :3 But really, this is amazing. Only sometimes things get a little too intense and I need to take a break. The start of the first chapter too I felt wasn't quite in sync with the rest of it. I don't know, but something didn't quite feel right, almost as if you were warming up.

Hope to see more great stuff :D

~Perfect Soldier 01

I love how you set the mood in your stories! I'd say description is one of your advantages in writing! (It's kind of a cliffy... leaving Link with that 'dark shade' in his eyes.)

O... I like this fan fiction... it's very suspensful... Great job!

Did u get my letters?

I've been writin' to ya b-cuz ,y computer sometimes does not let me review directly from .

Everytime this happens, I write the reviews in an e-mail and send it to orcawoman (you know the rest).

Is that really your e-mail address? I got it from .

Anyways, here's your review...

I think you're right, Link's goin' coocoo. Who could've ever imagined that HE would treat Zelda like that...and then leave so calm...This is a bit wicked ya know (that's what makes me like it so much).

Ya know, I may not b able to read the Forgotten Memories' last chapter til weekend b-cuz it's really long and I need some time...but you're getting reviewed anyways...take care!

Creepy. Everything about Link has gotten creepier. Poor Zelda. We need more writers like you! Some people just aren't creative enough. I know I've fallen into slumps before. Oh well, as always, keep up the good work!

Give an "A"! Give a "W"! Give me an "E"! Give me a "S"! Give me an "O"! Give me a "M"! Give me an "E"! What do we have? AWESOME!

Sorry for not reviweing before... my IE has been a pain in the $$ lately and only works when it feels like to -_- It'd make you happy if I updated? Oh, okay, I'll try to update P But I'm such a lazy person xD

I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! I WANNA I WANNA I WANNA! Update soon! :D

Hello!

Lovely chapter you have here; I particularly liked the descriptions, and how Link convinced himself that his harshness with Zelda was soley her fault. I also liked the incorporation of rain - it went well with the angsty feelings of your fic. I noticed you did the same thing in 'The Legend of Zelda: Forgotten Memories' (which I took a look at and so far find delightful! ) in about the second chapter... very well done.

Your description of the kiss was very nice, and a bit chilling, particularly when the reader realises he's staring in that disconcerting manner at the princess... And your portrayal of Zelda is wonderful! Kudos for a job well done!

I look forward to reading the revised edition of this fic; in my opinion it's wonderful the way it is, so a revised version would be absolutely thrilling! I look forward to another chapter, and wish you well.

Adios,

- Selah

OMG! I missed a chapter! How could I? I'm so sorry I haven't reviewed, but now for both chapters : really good! Link's beginning to change... poor Zelda, I think she will be hurt before the end... probably in both meanings of the word. Update soon!

Hey LaAriella!

Nice chapter again! Sorry I don't have much time, but keep going and I will look forward to reading the next one!