Reviews for Ice Cream Sundaes and Chocolate Cake
LexiLoLo200 chapter 20 . 10/17/2004
Ooh,I love this fan fic, but please, please get char and bryon back together! Update soon!
CrazyRnRFan chapter 20 . 10/17/2004

cool fic looking forward to reading the next chapter )
charliestark chapter 20 . 10/15/2004
I'm REALLY REALLY REALLY sory i havent updated for youre story in so long. i was really sick! im really sory. anyways, you're chapters are AWESOME! its so sad though ; im kinda mad at Bryon why did HE have to be like that. i would have expected it more from Jeff or something. but okay... CANT WAIT FOR MORE!1 UPDATE SOON!
laura chapter 20 . 10/14/2004

it is so awesum and sad!i uv the story u should send it off to ann m. martin,its so good.

keep writing,im luvin ur style!

atalanta's apples chapter 20 . 10/14/2004
again, too short! But I'm satisfied because there were two chapters!...I can't wait for this to be updated because I want to know where you're taking it!
atalanta's apples chapter 19 . 10/14/2004
Oh much too short! But I still liked it. It's too bad they broke up..where are you going with this?
Bewilderment chapter 20 . 10/13/2004
This looks bad...almost like you want Byron and Charlotte to be together. *sigh* I've always thought that Jeff was ever so much cooler and hotter (not that I was checking out eleven year olds...this is from fanfics that I got this, I guess) than Byron, who seemed like the uncool one of the triplet trio thing. But these two chapters seemed transitional, and I am waiting for when Jeff and Britney fall apart. I think that would be interesting. So, yeah, good job, and I did cut off the Five's on my screename. So see ya! Update soon cause your story is so good. aptly named

P.S. i DO love that song that you threw in there!
munch010 chapter 20 . 10/12/2004
this is really good. please continue it!
lladybug777 chapter 20 . 10/12/2004
good but you make it sound as though she is sick like "honey i brought you soup," and "i made you toast hot chocolate and eggs!" and she stays in bed all day. but as a loyal fan i still await the next chapter!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!
Dizzy-Dreamer chapter 20 . 10/11/2004
It can't nearly be over, it's can't end! I love it, it's so... so real, I love the way you write it.
stargirlie chapter 20 . 10/11/2004
Oh, two great chapters AGAIN! How do you do it? Poor Char, breakups suck more than nearly anything else in the world. :o( In answer to your notes... I have absolutely no idea where you're going with this (this may be because I just got back from College and my head is completely drained) but the way I HOPE it goes is as follows: Byron apologises for being a momentary jerk, hopefully has a good reason of some sort which he explains, Char finds the strength to believe what he told her (which I'm sure is all true), they get back together, Jeff dumps the bimbo and goes back to California on good terms with everybody, and we all wind up in happily-ever-after land, where everything works out so that everyone's happy.

On the other hand, if you were going to get them all to stop speaking to each other, kill them all off and have their restless ghosts regret everything for all eternity, that's good, too.

I'll be returning to my padded room now. ;oD
XxXCocoPuffXxX chapter 20 . 10/11/2004
i love it!
rebeccag239 chapter 20 . 10/11/2004
Great chapter!

Carry on writing

sabs chapter 18 . 10/8/2004
Bewilderment555 chapter 18 . 10/7/2004
well. I know you were all, "I'm sorry to all the Byron and Char fans out there", but I REALLY didn't see this coming.

I was totally unsure as to HOW you were going to pull it off, but you did it. And I was rooting for Jeff all along! This makes me so happy! I ReAlly cannot wait till you post next, because these two chapters were SO nice. They brightened my day. Good job!

I think that you are awesome as a writer and if you don't finish this story, it would be literary travesty. I'm sorry if this seems too perky but this chapter cheered me up and I am kind of hyper! :)

Thanks! aptly named

P.S. i wish you daisy flip-flops and all that they imply.
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