Reviews for The New Sith Order: Mirrormath
Guest chapter 1 . 12/22/2012
i dont understand a single word you said!
Tessa-Chan chapter 11 . 4/13/2007
No! What an evil cliffy to leave your readers on! Please update soon.
Pyxelle chapter 10 . 3/11/2006
Hey!

Recognize me? I just wanted to pop in here and say I still love this story. (redundant or what?)

I was bored and decided to reread this when I was bopping around Great way to spend the time, btw!

Pyxelle
Orange Lantern Tsume chapter 9 . 12/27/2005
Fascinating. I just assumed the crazy bastard Qui-Gon met had seized control of the Force and had used it to his own twisted ends. Good job on bringing in a conspiracy, though; adds a layer of complexity to the fic. Keep up the good work. Cheers!
Audreidi chapter 8 . 9/14/2005
(muses about the potential for an Obi/Jaina ship)

...Snrk. Haven't we had enough of those already.

Yay! The server FINALLY let me review! So. Hopefully I didn't forget any/much of what I wanted to say.

The bit with Eliaith popping by to greet Qui-Gon, I think, was my favourite part of the chapter. (grins) Partly because you did a great third-person perspective on Qui-Gon, partly because it amused me so much, and partly because...well, you know. (hugs Eli)

Hopefully poor Luke won't get a concussion...hopefully Mara will turn up in one piece...

Oh, yes, and I already babbled to you about the prologue. (grins) I'll just say once more I still like the present-tense bit for Tatooine.
Blackheart Syaoran chapter 8 . 8/1/2005
I'll admit that your arguments are valid and that I'm addicted to Zahn's version of Luke. That said, this chapter was just plain spooky. Qui-Gon's scene was really good, especially when he was wondering about the Force and its universal rank. As for what happened to Luke's saber...I hope it'll turn up in usable condition, since it's one of the cooler weapons; Mara's too, since she's using Anakin's old saber. As for what happened to Mara herself, I can only pray she is tailing Maul, since him taking a prisoner seems kinda iffy. Regardless, keep up the brilliant work. Hope to see more soon. Cheers.
Audreidi chapter 7 . 7/7/2005
"...or, as someone more precise would’ve noted, 2.5504 seconds..."

Heh heh heh.

This, I think, was the best chapter you've made for this story by far. The pacing was good, the fight was good...woo! I most especially liked how you described one Zabrak phantom. The fight - it seems as if Luke and Mara were taken down a little quickly for two of their skill, but taken into perspective...Maul had had the ability, even as a Sith apprentice, never mind master, to deal with an Old Republic Jedi and Padawan. It was just the gloating that got him in the end. Heh. So I think you did the fight very well in that sense. Padmé...well, she's always melodramatic in her later years. Snicker snicker. Anakin still seems a little assuming for a nine-year-old, but he's playing out all right, too, despite that.'

Oh, and nice chapter length. (winks) Now. MORRE STORY...
Slayer rock chick chapter 7 . 7/6/2005
This is quite interesting. Can they meet in t he same place soon?
Blackheart Syaoran chapter 7 . 7/6/2005
My God, you actually updated! And here I thought I'd never see another chapter of this kick-ass story! Good work! Thanks about the name; and speaking of names, you aren't supposed to hyphenate Mara's last names, since she uses them like Leia does (Leia Organa Solo, e.g.). The fight was badass, to be honest, though I don't think they'd go down so easy. You HAVE to read Timothy Zahn's last three books (Specter of the Past, Vision of the Future, and Survivor's Quest) to see just how unstoppable Luke and Mara are. I mean, yeah, Maul's a death machine, but he lost to Padawan Obi-Wan and Darth Vader (Star Wars Tales 9), and Luke took out Vader and a shitload of other people. Still, your story, so I leave the decisions to you. You did a wonderful job, regardless. Padme running into the latest Fett seems scary, and is sure to have major consequences. As for Anakin...we'll see; that kid's tougher to read than a blank piece of paper. As for time-travel fics...try mine out. It's called The Old And The New, and has Luke and Mara transported back to the Battle of Geonosis (because I want to have Luke/Mara double-team Dooku; it'll be a fight(s) to remember). Keep up the fantastic work. Hope to read more soon. Cheers!
Molly chapter 7 . 7/6/2005
So I think I literally sent in the review for this chapter as you posted it, or maybe you got it in time, but somehow I don't think so. I've been a naughty beta *slaps hand* NAUGHTY! *sigh* Honestly, I didn't offer any significant changes made or comments that would've altered the story alot, I think you'd addressed all my significant comments/concerns. Soo...great chapter, flowed well! Very mysterious, specialy the baddie, who officially scares me! Yes, me. I suppose you're wanting Chapter 7 back eh? I do so like holding it hosta...er, reading it. I shall send forth the commentary soon's as I get to a computer I can check my personal email on. Hey, I'll even send a complimentary Sith trainer for ya, to help you out with the scary, Sithly bits! *pushes Darth Snookums forward* Here ya go!
exactlymyidea chapter 7 . 7/6/2005
i like this story. it's really good.
WhiteWizard101 chapter 6 . 6/16/2005
This is great! Update soon.
Adrienne Gollumeyes chapter 1 . 4/23/2005
Okay, chappie one...

And all donned one rings and vanished! *evil laughter*

Okay, j/k...

Was this intro supposed to be like other intros in the SW movies? Like with the scroling yellow letters? *grins*

BUT YOU LEFT OUT THE LAST DOT!

NO... *runs out of breath*

Again, I say, mesa likes...

A one word description of this chapter: freaky...

*abruptly falls on knees* But please, please, don't use the word 'seen'. It's 'have seen' or 'saw', but not 'seen'.

*gets up*

*flicks a speck of dust of shirt*

*

O! Supper soon...

I'M POINLESSLY WIERD! YAYAYAY!

Sigh, oh the mental instability of me...
Adrienne Gollumeyes chapter 6 . 4/23/2005
O! *is incredibly amused* UPDATE UPDATE!

ALERT: Tomorrow I will personally shake Eowyn until she promises to continue this fanfiction. END ALERT

Yay! Perty story, Eowyn! I finally printed it out and read it! Mesa likes... and wants to know what happens next! Although I won't let you tell me 'cuz strangely I like suspense... Mwa ha ha ha ha!

Anyways, I hope you don't mind some constructive critism from me once in awhile, or me pointing out some plot thingie that doesn't seem quite right...

Although, since I don't much about SW anyways...

Sigh...

*starts screaming* They killed off Coruscant? ACK! THEY'RE SO MEAN! *calms down*

*clears throat*

Now for the actual review...

Woah, that was an excellent portrayal of Obi-Wan's confusion. I don't think it could be better.

*wonders what would happen if Obi meets little Ani again* Heh... eek...

Heh, anyways... I like that word...

Ehem, boy, is this ever a rediculusly long review... and I obviously can't spell...

Ack! I'm getting off topic! *is annoyed at self... kinda*

Okay, I'm gonna go back and review each chapter individually... *grins for no reason whatsoever*

MTFNOTBWY!
Molly chapter 6 . 4/21/2005
So, can I tell you how COOL this chapter was! It is without a doubt above and beyond what I expected...*looks around suddenly, hearing voices* What? Help beta this story? I can't say that cause I'm biased? What ARE you talking about?

*uses Sith powers*

I am not biased, this is not the beta you are thinking of. This is a great chapter, full of angst and panic attacks from Obi-Wan, and confusion from Luke, and freaky odd dreams from Anakin and a phantom baddie reveling in all the chaos. Move along until the next chapter comes out.
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