Reviews for Coffee Break
trascendenza chapter 1 . 8/18/2007
What a lovely sketch of these characters. I love the details about their family, and the great working repertoire they have. Wonderfully written.
shallowness chapter 1 . 6/15/2004
Just lovely, insightful character piece. Both of the characters are so clearly drawn and it's a treat. I love the respect Kyle has for her, the way he sees (and you show) her strength. I love the way he's come close enough for her to show her humanity too. Very moving picture of two professionals with an understanding of the cost of their jobs.

I love the way you build up the fic with details.
ATMcLean chapter 1 . 6/15/2004
A wonderful look at the relationship between two very much neglected characters in Jake 2.0 fic, and two of the more difficult to write for.

You've done a great job of illustrating both the effects such jobs have on the social and family lives of the people involved and in capturing the platonic loyalty that seemed to have developed between Lou and Kyle. A very nice counterpoint to the palpable tension between Jake and Diane.