Reviews for Harry Potter and the Portents of Doom
Larenars chapter 24 . 7/21
A great beginning, if only there were more...Thanks for sharing though. I'll never be able to get the idea of Snapes giving a bewildered Harry the Talk.
Zela3 chapter 24 . 3/3
Interesting start! I can't wait for Harry to find out he likes Snape romantically...I can't help but notice that you haven't updated since 2012, and hope that isn't an indicator of an abandoned fic. I really hope you continue this fanfic.
Guest chapter 24 . 9/19/2013
Cute. I hope you finish it.
bexmania chapter 24 . 4/28/2013
How delightfully akward.
Arcane Theorem chapter 24 . 2/7/2013
Can't wait for the next chapter of this

Please update? :)
Azrael Jinsei chapter 24 . 1/9/2013
Thank you so much for writing this. Please write more soon. I'm looking forward to it. Thank you
klaralouw chapter 24 . 11/20/2012
What an amazing story! It would be great if you could update soon ;) xxx
Sooph chapter 1 . 8/28/2012
Great chapter, just wanted to point out that it's: "the Daily Prophet"
Not "Profit"
Surrealistic Angel chapter 24 . 7/20/2012
Can't wait for the next update! :)
13AkiraKuranXIII chapter 24 . 7/20/2012
Ahh no I caught up! Well, this story is brilliant so far. I cannot wait to read more.
Kitty Black Cat chapter 24 . 6/18/2012
Love this! It's really, really good. I loved the whole discussion of courtship between Harry and Snape. Love your Harry and Snape. Can't wait to see the next chapters!
yuiop chapter 3 . 6/17/2012
Before any of the students could try something else, their invisible assailant began throwing curses their way. They had no way of knowing what was thrown since they couldn't hear the spells being cast. Before long Ernie, Zack, Goyle and PARKINSON were all down from unknown spells.

then a little ways down you say:

Ron and Malfoy were covering the students movement and Hermione and PANSY were casting shield charms for other students as well. Before Harry could give the order to begin, Dobby popped into the center of the room, looking distressed.

Are you aware her name is PANSY PARKINSON? It's the same person who was down or was it just a mess up? Either way thouth you should know.
666Neme666 chapter 24 . 5/29/2012
Finally! I was waiting for soooo long! Why don't you have a computer? What happened? Is there a chance you will get one? Because it's bust be quite a pain to type on a phone... :S

Anyway... the chapter was promising. "To gather the other two erstwhile members of your group for a discussion on proper stalking procedures." - this part was simply hilarious! XD I loved it. I hope you will be able to update the next chapter soon. :)
Gracealma chapter 24 . 5/25/2012
Love the story. Good character development and the characters seem real!
sm1982 chapter 24 . 5/25/2012
Beautifully written.

Keep up the great work.

Please update soon.

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