Reviews for Childish or Not
Hooligan05 chapter 6 . 5/12/2015
Your story is an awesome one consisting of a good plotline..but the problem is,, your writing style is so boring, things kinda getting too rushy and its pretty random..im not flaming, im just stating whats my impression on it..so, good job.
yuffentine galore chapter 3 . 3/27/2011
Omg... LEARN HOW TO SPELL PERSON. The story is cute so far but too many spelling mistakes can unfortunately cause the fan fiction to lose it's appeal.
Reeve Tuesti chapter 1 . 6/6/2010
The story in general had a good plot. But I think you made a few mistakes that can easily be arranged, because it was rather unpleasent to read, I must say.

First of all, you should contain your dislikes a bit better. Or get some more information about the characters you dislike, if you're writting so much about them. For example, we know Cid is foul-mouthed and annoying, but he still cares about Yuffie, and is not a perverted old man. We've seen that throughout the Final Fantasy VII series. As also you made mistakes with Barret and Caith Sith, placing them COMPLETELY out of character, by the things you made them do.

Second, I think it would have been nice to keep your author's comments, at least you should have placed foot-notes, because it was a mood-killer to read what you thought about coal lumps and candies, when the story was about Vincent and Yuffie.

And that's about it. As I said, I thought your story had a good plot, but you executed it poorly. Mainly your hate towards random characters ruined the mood completely.
SmokingStogies chapter 11 . 4/17/2008
i loved this story it was so damn funny and i really loved the barret and cid thing it was so awesome welp thats all other then some smiley men :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
devilin chapter 11 . 7/19/2007
Wonderful joke! Instant fave on my list!
marykateraviel chapter 1 . 5/4/2007
Hey, I really liked your story! My friend found it first. She's okay with the Yuffentine stuff, but she mainly got it for me. She really only likes Vincent and one of her characters...ANYWAY, I thought it was really awesome!Especially the way you got rid of the freakin' thing they call a cat! I hate that ugly little machine! I also liked the way Barret and Cid were throughout the whole thing! They were so funny! Bye!
FearandLoathingXIX chapter 11 . 4/27/2007
Wow that was a pleasant hour of my life, tanks :)
FearandLoathingXIX chapter 10 . 4/27/2007
well you said you didn't like cat sith...i just never realized how much
FearandLoathingXIX chapter 5 . 4/27/2007
heehee ;) *giggles like the shameless fangirl that she is*
Sharingan Kyuubi chapter 11 . 8/29/2006
*blinks at last few lines*...

see... I like Yaoi... it's normally cute... but that was just plain weird...

kinda like how I don't get Vincent and Cid... I doubt I ever will...

I'll ALWAYS be YUFFENITNE!

WO! VINCENTYUFFIE FOREVER!

great story! LOVED IT
Sharingan Kyuubi chapter 10 . 8/29/2006
b-b-but... I LIKE CAIT! he's got teh funny irish axcent! and... like... killing him was a little crud...

but good none the less!

YUFFENTINE FOREVA!
Kkim19 chapter 1 . 7/8/2006
it's really good! wow, poor yuffie! i can't believe she forgot about the big plan! wow, cid does curse a lot...great story so far!

~kk
Blackobsideon chapter 11 . 5/8/2006
Can i just say that you are a genius i have not laughed so hard in so long (it was that cait sith bit) your story is so cute i loved it to bits that is why if you dont make a sequel i shall hunt you down and trap you in a seperate dimension where you are completly alone except for cait sith.

PS PLEASE MAKE A SEQUEL!
SapphireXSerpent chapter 11 . 4/15/2006
S'nice. I liked it.
lol chapter 10 . 2/5/2006
you really hate cait sith huh?

ah well
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