Reviews for Demonic past |
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![]() ![]() You got the Akito personality down pat. I don't know a thing about ONI, but sounds interesting. Too bad you'll probably never finish it. Oh Well! Good Job anyway. |
![]() ![]() Love the story, do you have any more of it? I think what you have is a very interesting story of how he is sent back in time (seeing as it is mentioned a few times in the anime as well). |
![]() ![]() Pretty good, for a rookie. Keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() SHESH! Some of those people were SO RUDE! Any case , well done! I look forward to seeing more of you. Poor Akito! Ah well , at least he's away from the clutching ditz! He could also really help out the future with the right moves here in the past. Something to think about. Be seeing ya. Derek The Rogue |
![]() ![]() Interesting, but I would suggest fleshing out the chapters and spacing the events. Anyway I like this. |
![]() ![]() it was okay you were right i havent read one of these yet. keep up the good work! *Gekiganger lover* |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh look i reviewed all right start but can it be longer, update soon |