Reviews for The heir of Theodred
Charlotte1 chapter 1 . 8/10/2013
I wrote this story when I was seventeen. There is my excuse for this apparent childishness. What's your excuse?
TMI Fairy chapter 2 . 8/10/2013
Childish. I'm simply not in the mood ...
TMI Fairy chapter 1 . 8/10/2013
Somewhat childish, I'll try Chapter II.
Randomer chapter 1 . 11/14/2004
sorry this is a bit of a random first chappie review. The writing is great and its is interesting but i would just like to point out that mayda cannot inherit the throne as she is a girl. But it is interesting and I like it. and Mayda isn't shockingly mary-siueish. and you deserve a gold star simply for the fact you didn't write either 'Girl falls into middle earth' or a 'magically beautiful woman becomes tenth member of fellowship'
LOCISVU chapter 22 . 11/10/2004
Now they're in for it quarrel was unnecessary.
LOCISVU chapter 21 . 11/10/2004
What's happening?
I AM EOWYN chapter 22 . 11/9/2004
Okay Chapter, But I didn't quite get the ending.
I AM EOWYN chapter 21 . 11/9/2004

It was so cute! Keep Writing!
Voldie on Varsity Track chapter 22 . 11/9/2004
I. Lurve. You.

So many chapters. Yayness! :)
lady scribe of avandell chapter 22 . 11/8/2004
*bursts into laughter* the things you put these children through! i feel rather sorry for dior and huor...what a way to have their first real encounter with eomer! and i must say, that line about all of the children in the royal line of rohan being liars...that takes the cake! cannot wait for the rest (even if it's not so much about elfwine as mayda). sere mi eru...lsoa
lady scribe of avandell chapter 21 . 11/8/2004
eep! no! not a fire! i just hope everyone will be safe...aga, you are so good, that i have true concern! keep writing! sere mi eru...lsoa
Eowyn Organa chapter 20 . 11/7/2004
Cute! Write more :)!
LOCISVU chapter 20 . 11/7/2004
Well,I guess that Dior and Mathain are growing 're seeing Mayda in a different light now.
Voldie on Varsity Track chapter 20 . 11/7/2004
It's about time you updated. Nice job, fuzz. :)
lady scribe of avandell chapter 20 . 11/7/2004
uh-oh...jealous lovers! well, sort of. what intrigue! a love triangle among pre-adolescents! lol..cannot wait for more! sere mi eru...lsoa
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