Reviews for Stawberry Jacuzzi
Goodburgerfan7 chapter 2 . 8/11/2017
Pls mak more pls
brothermine chapter 2 . 8/11/2016
Going by the last time this was updated I'm guessing there is no chance but please please update! I love good burger and was so happy to see there is fanfiction for it! I am really enjoying this and need there to be more!
Michelle B chapter 2 . 9/29/2015
How do you say... Perfect? Well, I guess you could definitely say it in a strawberry jacuzzi!
fear2breathe chapter 2 . 7/21/2014
Loving this so far. Funny! Please update :)
Guest chapter 2 . 7/3/2014
lol fabulicius story I love it, I'm not sure who's crazier Ed or Heather. Btw I'm just wondering is Dex still working there ( Ed & Dex are an awesome comedy team throw Heather into the mix & there'll be a mega laughing storm). Update soon I can't wait to read the next chapter.
UrbanBorn chapter 2 . 2/25/2012
This is hilarious. I love how Ed gets into the milkshake machine and goes "STRAWBERRY JACUZZI" and heather looked at him like HE was the crazy one
Daddy's Little Rabbit chapter 2 . 12/4/2011
I wasn't going to leave a review. I was going to read and enjoy your story, until I seen a messed up message. Don't listen to that CSI guy. You got a talent for writing kid. Some people are just trying to make themselves feel better, by trying to put other people down. Continue writing. Do NOT stop. I like this story a lot. Great job. But, I did see a few mistakes. I could still understand the story. Awesome job writer.
Walking After Twilight chapter 1 . 8/17/2011
I wasn't gonna leave a review until I saw what CSI-Fanatic-CSI said and I just wanted to let you know that some people just get their jollies by hurting other peoples feelings. I don't understand why most of the time people don't take time to leave good reviews but will go out of their way to write nasty ones. Don't listen to them! I think you are very creative and you should keep on writing. :) God loves you!
MRSCHRISBROWN chapter 2 . 7/23/2011
i love good burger!
Guest chapter 2 . 2/28/2011
I love you. Post more. Now. Please.
shana elmsford chapter 2 . 5/8/2010
this is cool

when is chapter 3 coming out?
XXspuffster101XX chapter 2 . 3/4/2009
it's an interesting start...and since it's been almost five years...I guess there isn't gonna be more chapters...I should say though, that this should have gone under the movie catagory since it takes place after the movie...but I guess that doesn't really matter...anyway...I love Kel Mitchel *(SP?)*...who loves orange soda? kel loves orange soda. is it true? I do I do I dO...heh...


coolieofreak chapter 2 . 12/18/2007
wow This is awesome!

I love good burger!
andrea chapter 2 . 11/6/2007
That was very very funny i can't wait for the next chapter your a very great author
Jasmine Medonse chapter 2 . 10/27/2007
Hey, I thought you did a good job portraying Ed and 'Psychopath' (lol). The only problem I have is that... it's short...? Please finish it :)
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