|Reviews for Stawberry Jacuzzi|
| fear2breathe chapter 2 . 7/21/2014
Loving this so far. Funny! Please update :)
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/3/2014
lol fabulicius story I love it, I'm not sure who's crazier Ed or Heather. Btw I'm just wondering is Dex still working there ( Ed & Dex are an awesome comedy team throw Heather into the mix & there'll be a mega laughing storm). Update soon I can't wait to read the next chapter.
| UrbanBorn chapter 2 . 2/25/2012
This is hilarious. I love how Ed gets into the milkshake machine and goes "STRAWBERRY JACUZZI" and heather looked at him like HE was the crazy one
| The Unknown Smile chapter 2 . 12/4/2011
I wasn't going to leave a review. I was going to read and enjoy your story, until I seen a messed up message. Don't listen to that CSI guy. You got a talent for writing kid. Some people are just trying to make themselves feel better, by trying to put other people down. Continue writing. Do NOT stop. I like this story a lot. Great job. But, I did see a few mistakes. I could still understand the story. Awesome job writer.
| Walking After Twilight chapter 1 . 8/17/2011
I wasn't gonna leave a review until I saw what CSI-Fanatic-CSI said and I just wanted to let you know that some people just get their jollies by hurting other peoples feelings. I don't understand why most of the time people don't take time to leave good reviews but will go out of their way to write nasty ones. Don't listen to them! I think you are very creative and you should keep on writing. :) God loves you!
| MRSCHRISBROWN chapter 2 . 7/23/2011
i love good burger!
| Guest chapter 2 . 2/28/2011
I love you. Post more. Now. Please.
| shana elmsford chapter 2 . 5/8/2010
this is cool
when is chapter 3 coming out?
| XXspuffster101XX chapter 2 . 3/4/2009
it's an interesting start...and since it's been almost five years...I guess there isn't gonna be more chapters...I should say though, that this should have gone under the movie catagory since it takes place after the movie...but I guess that doesn't really matter...anyway...I love Kel Mitchel *(SP?)*...who loves orange soda? kel loves orange soda. is it true? I do I do I dO...heh...
| coolieofreak chapter 2 . 12/18/2007
wow This is awesome!
I love good burger!
| andrea chapter 2 . 11/6/2007
That was very very funny i can't wait for the next chapter your a very great author
| Jasmine Medonse chapter 2 . 10/27/2007
Hey, I thought you did a good job portraying Ed and 'Psychopath' (lol). The only problem I have is that... it's short...? Please finish it :)
| Tears of Deathwishxxx chapter 1 . 5/14/2007
Fuck these bitches with no talent of their own to write a hilarious work of art, so they gotta bring people down to their level. You should update and I really enjoy this. And all you anonymous writers, why don't y'all step from the shadows and say this shit?
| Gregsandersfan chapter 1 . 4/4/2007
I loved it. It was cute and funny. I read the reviews that the other people had put down. It kinda pissed me off. Who cares what those assholes think about your story. They are probably just losers who like to put people down. If you like the show and movie, great! Don't listen to those other losers they just have to find some way to put people down.
| SmellyThePirate chapter 2 . 12/28/2006
I sorta liked it. So update soon, pretty plz!