|Reviews for Call From the Future|
| KageOkami-Kogo chapter 2 . 11/7/2010
I'm kinda confused but sounds really awesome so far! Very interesting! I can't wait to see what happens next :D. A word of advice though, add more narration, more detail, it gives a story more life and makes it juicier. For example, explain where they are, what they're doing, feeling, etc... don't just go with dialogue. Keep it up!
| OfficiallyAbi chapter 2 . 3/26/2008
Keep ... going ... PLEASE! I need to read more!
| SG1-4EVER chapter 2 . 2/21/2008
I'm dying to know more!
| rankokunalpha1 chapter 2 . 4/25/2006
damn this is going to be interesting i hope to see more in the future!
| nadda chapter 2 . 10/8/2005
update please. very verry interesting and wicked* good.
*new england vocab strikes again, this use of wicked means very, very, very, very, very, very...
| Teri chapter 1 . 8/14/2005
Great story, where is the rest?
| MrStolpe chapter 2 . 6/27/2005
Please post more
| caro2lalala chapter 2 . 4/23/2005
Suekay, I'm loving it, any chance of an update?
| krahmogh chapter 2 . 3/22/2005
can we get an update please?
| Scoodoo58 chapter 2 . 2/2/2005
This story is so koolism
| galaxy chapter 2 . 12/28/2004
It starting to get very interesting. Keep going!
| Vinnet chapter 2 . 11/17/2004
The second chapter's a little hard to follow, but still a good story. I think I'm getting the hang of everything, and it's an incredible premise.
| Ann-sgcfan chapter 2 . 11/16/2004
I can't wait to read more! Great idea!
| evil-kenshin chapter 2 . 11/16/2004
great story so far
| Wordling chapter 2 . 11/16/2004
Hey no fair, no one is supposed to suspect thor's
housecleaning skills might be less than perfect.
Seriously though, everyone knows that the true
test of intelligence is the ability to use data
not the ability to regurgatate it.
In my own opinion it is a ZPG, a generator not
a storage module. The connection is live as
opposed to a static one in a jar.
Good premise on the story, though I think that
you might want to look at the temporal prime
directive a little closer.
Would not the general have left instructions on
how to handle these little bumps in the temporal
hiway? What is the protocol since as we know from
1969 that we already know from the other side it
will happen? (like maybe a dated envelope to be
opened a year in advance by the commanding Ofc.)
shouldn't they have just given first name, rank
and non ga'ouldness. Since proper names can be
a risk? what about blood samples and DNA checks?
Now I think you have done a good job so far with
what you did, however I think you need to try to
see what they would see. Both from the control
booth and from the event horizon.
P.S. chronal bends are to/from the same place.
Now try to imagine what would happen if they
had landed on kalowna now? talk about a mess.
(or really mess with us and make it 1969)
Keep up the good writing though.