Reviews for Faded Future
trunksey chapter 15 . 1/25
This is great
0rigami chapter 15 . 11/23/2020
Despite some rough corners, this story had real potential. What a waste.
Scissors Dolphin chapter 11 . 7/27/2020
Stop with the "I'm evil. I know" author note. You are childish. Seriously.

Why is Vegeta so pathetic? Seriously? He can't do anything right. He apparently just doesn't have skills he really should have.
Scissors Dolphin chapter 9 . 7/27/2020
Are you really telling me that Vegeta would not check for tracers on everyone's ships? In canon, Vegeta and Radditz and Nappa got away no problem. Why in the world would they have trouble now?

That's the problem with so many of these fics. They try to ramp up the tension by making Frieza somehow just magically be able to trace Vegeta and put him on a time-limit. That is utterly ridiculous.
Scissors Dolphin chapter 7 . 7/27/2020
Again, why would Vegeta reveal that he can sense Ki?
Scissors Dolphin chapter 6 . 7/27/2020
How utterly stupid is it for Vegeta to hide his Ki? He knows that it is special. Why is he trying to fight Frieza and potentially revealing his secrets? "Forgot" is not an excuse. He isn't an idiot. He had a month to figure these shit out.
Scissors Dolphin chapter 4 . 7/27/2020
Work on your English. Possessives need apostrophes.
SentaiPurpleRanger chapter 15 . 6/6/2020
Please return to this.
Wether you just continue this , rewrite it , rewrite this with super fully in mind , or rewrite this keeping the pre-Time Shift timeline Z only while adding Super elements afterwards , I just eanna see this continued in any way.
adi6123 chapter 15 . 5/17/2020
Interesting story. I wonder who's responsible for the time shift. They're all going to be facing Frieza soon.
Revan3363 chapter 15 . 11/1/2019
Good story so far, any chance of an update?
The One Who Reads Too Much chapter 15 . 10/14/2018
Well, at least it's not a giant tree parasite thing.

Heh, brotherly bonding without a Full Nelson? Unbelievable, heh.
The One Who Reads Too Much chapter 14 . 10/14/2018
Oh boy, one chapter left and I hope they bother getting the Dragon Balls gathered before Freeza gets there.

Heh, since they can find them again easily enough, maybe they should just wish Freeza into some intergalactic empty void of space. Somewhere 3/4 of the way to the Andromeda galaxy should be good enough.
The One Who Reads Too Much chapter 13 . 10/14/2018
Pft, here's hoping whoever did surgery/blood samples for Vegeta will be done with the results minutes after Bulma and the group have already left on a world tour.
The One Who Reads Too Much chapter 12 . 10/14/2018
"He was so accustomed to the accelerated methods of the regeneration tanks, senzu beans, and Little Green's powers now."

"Still, he's kind of cute like this. He's so small and kind of vulnerable-looking," she commented after a moment, lips pulling up into a smile, and Vegeta wondered whether she was intentionally taunting him. Did she remember and was just saying those things because she knew he would hate them?"

Well, I certainly would be. I'd be like Tien in DBZ abridged.
The One Who Reads Too Much chapter 11 . 10/14/2018
Huh...was definitely expecting more of a ROB explanation for the time travel, what with all the random deities in DBZ, but some guy trying to get revenge by killing Vegeta/the Z team as kids makes sense.
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