This is great

Despite some rough corners, this story had real potential. What a waste.

Stop with the "I'm evil. I know" author note. You are childish. Seriously.

Why is Vegeta so pathetic? Seriously? He can't do anything right. He apparently just doesn't have skills he really should have.

Are you really telling me that Vegeta would not check for tracers on everyone's ships? In canon, Vegeta and Radditz and Nappa got away no problem. Why in the world would they have trouble now?

That's the problem with so many of these fics. They try to ramp up the tension by making Frieza somehow just magically be able to trace Vegeta and put him on a time-limit. That is utterly ridiculous.

Again, why would Vegeta reveal that he can sense Ki?

How utterly stupid is it for Vegeta to hide his Ki? He knows that it is special. Why is he trying to fight Frieza and potentially revealing his secrets? "Forgot" is not an excuse. He isn't an idiot. He had a month to figure these shit out.

Work on your English. Possessives need apostrophes.

Please return to this.
Wether you just continue this , rewrite it , rewrite this with super fully in mind , or rewrite this keeping the pre-Time Shift timeline Z only while adding Super elements afterwards , I just eanna see this continued in any way.

Interesting story. I wonder who's responsible for the time shift. They're all going to be facing Frieza soon.

Good story so far, any chance of an update?

Well, at least it's not a giant tree parasite thing.

Heh, brotherly bonding without a Full Nelson? Unbelievable, heh.

Oh boy, one chapter left and I hope they bother getting the Dragon Balls gathered before Freeza gets there.

Heh, since they can find them again easily enough, maybe they should just wish Freeza into some intergalactic empty void of space. Somewhere 3/4 of the way to the Andromeda galaxy should be good enough.

Pft, here's hoping whoever did surgery/blood samples for Vegeta will be done with the results minutes after Bulma and the group have already left on a world tour.

"He was so accustomed to the accelerated methods of the regeneration tanks, senzu beans, and Little Green's powers now."
FTFY

"Still, he's kind of cute like this. He's so small and kind of vulnerable-looking," she commented after a moment, lips pulling up into a smile, and Vegeta wondered whether she was intentionally taunting him. Did she remember and was just saying those things because she knew he would hate them?"

Well, I certainly would be. I'd be like Tien in DBZ abridged.

Huh...was definitely expecting more of a ROB explanation for the time travel, what with all the random deities in DBZ, but some guy trying to get revenge by killing Vegeta/the Z team as kids makes sense.