Reviews for Faded Future
kitsuneluvuh chapter 12 . 7/5/2009
Aw, poor Vegeta...

Nice chapter! I think you really nailed how the characters would react in that situation, you know? 100% believable. And I LOVED the mental image of little Goku clinging to his older brother. XD So cute! I can't wait for the next chapter!
kitsuK8 chapter 12 . 7/5/2009
I was kinda worried about how the meeting would go, but I think you wrote it very very well! Though I was disappointed that Bulma did not remember anything, I still think it makes this quite interesting as long as the whole story doesn't evolve entirely around Bulma and Vegeta. Don't get me wrong, I love stories on only those two, but I want more from Goku, Radditz, and Nappa. :D

Can't wait till the next update!

btw, loved the tail scene!
j chapter 12 . 7/5/2009
yay! They finally meet! I'm glad you updated, and I'm glad things sound like they're going well for you (in terms of career etc etc). can't wait for august! all the best till then!
XxKuroyoxX chapter 12 . 7/5/2009
Well he didn't die, so thats all good, I was really looking forward to him and bulma meeting, lol she doesn't even remember him yet they still fight like they always do, some things never change haha, anyway, great chapter :)
Unlisshed chapter 12 . 7/5/2009
hey, I just realised that I'm one of those annoying people who signs up for alerts then doesn't reveiw. I'm sorry for that!

Anyway this story is great. really original! I felt kinda sorry for Vegeta when he realised that Bulma didn't know who he was, but you're right, that would've been too easy for him.
Lady-Indis chapter 1 . 7/4/2009
Just stumbled upon this, and I'm excited that you intend to finish it. What a fantastic beginning! Oh my )
hopelesslydemented chapter 11 . 6/9/2009
Oh man, what a cliffhanger! Update soon, please? :)
j chapter 11 . 6/6/2009
aww - it's june and no new chapter yet :(...

pls update soon!
ljv chapter 11 . 6/4/2009
I would go as far as to call you a little bit evil, for sure. The cut off right as Capsule Corp is painful. I really like the concept and I am very much intrigued as to what you are going to do with this.
mynameisthedoctor chapter 8 . 6/2/2009
"Many times he’d wished that the humans would open their eyes to the truth and finally stop worshipping that posturing fool, Satan." Best. Line. Ever.
heyhey chapter 11 . 5/29/2009
Please update soon! This is such a great story!
MalachiteFlames chapter 11 . 4/10/2009
Love this stor very much. I am enjoying it lodes. The writing is good, nad plot much different than anything that I've ever read before. Love the characterisation.

Nicely done!

AF
Scarlet Amaranth chapter 11 . 4/10/2009
Ack, why did it end there? T_T

I'm loving this story~ Can't wait for the next chapter! Poor Vegeta...
Obelisk of Light chapter 11 . 4/8/2009
What a cliffy! Now you've really got me worried. But I don't think you've killed Vegeta yet. I'm looking forward to see what comes out in June.

Nitpick:

“Well, that’s a distinctive enough trait,” he murmured, wrapping his tail around his wai(s)t, hiding it beneath his overlarge shirt.
Lucillia chapter 6 . 4/6/2009
I think it would be good if this Raditz and Nappa ended up in the future where Vegeta and Goku belong. It would be good to give them a second chance before they blew the first one.
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