Reviews for Faded Future |
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The One Who Reads Too Much chapter 10 . 10/14/2018 Uh oh, he pushed the Bulma button. That's almost as bad as the Goku button, heheh. |
The One Who Reads Too Much chapter 9 . 10/14/2018 "Most Saiya-jins possess some degree of psychic ability. It's what allows them to communicate with one another telepathically." "Goku, did you just read my mind?" "Uh-huh." "How did you do that!?" "Muffin Button." "Normally it is left to a child's parents to teach him about those consequences, but, alas, Vegeta has neither mother nor father to teach him anything. Thus, the duty falls to me, and it is a duty that I do not take lightly." Awwww, it's so good that Freeza has really come to care for his adopted son. Heheheheh. |
The One Who Reads Too Much chapter 8 . 10/14/2018 "In other words, Raditz's ass is fried, but Nappa and I should be able to make it out of here fine." Oh look, Yamcha has already showed up in the story. |
The One Who Reads Too Much chapter 7 . 10/14/2018 "As a whole they're a rather dense race," he said, adding the last part as more of an afterthought." Aliens! Oh no, everyone panic (or stand there stupidly waiting to be killed, either one)! *Men in Black arrive* It's just some swamp gas explosions caused by light reflecting off of Venus, nothing to worry about. Oh, well nevermind then, back to our normal lives. Though, to be fair, a man built a pair of cyborgs/androids and a genetically engineered bug that are all able to kill any of the Subzero family without breaking a sweat. If he had been able to keep living and actually work with Bulma to build defenders for Earth, they could probably stand up to anything short of the Dragon Ball Super enemies. |
The One Who Reads Too Much chapter 6 . 10/14/2018 "Standing slightly off to the side, Zarbon frowned as he watched his master carelessly toss the torn piece of metal over his shoulder, hitting an unfortunate grunt in the face. The soldier squawked in surprise, clapping a hand over a deep gash on his face as dark blood began to gush out of it. Quickly he stumbled out of the room. Freeza didn't even seem to notice as he continued to stare out the window." Freeza is best evil overlord, too bad he never read The List though, heh. Clearly the scouters were broken. Yeah. Totally. Heheheh. |
The One Who Reads Too Much chapter 5 . 10/14/2018 Huh, Vegeta is definitely being more proactive than I thought he would be, well in a "find everyone sense". I figured he would be training extra hard so he could abuse this time travel to get a head start on his rivalry with Goku, heh. |
The One Who Reads Too Much chapter 3 . 10/14/2018 "He'd forgotten just how impossible that strength had once seemed, and his stomach seemed to drop into his feet as he reminded himself that this was only a fraction of the full force he was capable of." Really brings back memories of the older DBZ when Vegeta freaked out and was willing to join Goku just because the Ginyu Force was coming to Namek. When I first watched that I was actually pretty worried/in suspense, just because I knew Vegeta was already at the planet destroying level, so anyone that made him fear was something to be amazed by...and nowadays the Ginyu Force would be killed by a literal sneeze, heh. |
The One Who Reads Too Much chapter 2 . 10/14/2018 Okay, yeah, I can see why people would be hoping for more of this even years later. This is awesome. Vegeta is both in character in such a way that his progress shows, but you can tell from the little details that he's still a Renegade for Life, as TFS would say. Putting that character back into the position where he knows he's completely outclassed by everyone he hates, but also knows how to get stronger and where to find allies (kind of) is a great story to be told. |
Wemyss chapter 15 . 9/17/2017 Thank you for this great story. It now lives kind my head. |
Ale123456 chapter 15 . 6/12/2017 I hope you get around to finishing this some day. I have really enjoyed reading what you have written and I would love to read more. If you have no plan on finishing, could you pm me what the planned ending was? Thank you for writing at least this much. I definitely enjoyed reading it! |
Smithback chapter 15 . 1/14/2016 I would love to hear more of this awesome story |
Guest chapter 15 . 7/23/2015 This is such an interesting idea. I do hope u continue this one day. |
Farala chapter 2 . 7/9/2015 This is by far the most well thought out and well written I like that this is a surprise and that it wasn't planned. Very creative |
emxdeezy chapter 15 . 3/30/2015 i know its been years since you updated but youve got me hooked and you said you would finish! gaahhh hopefully one day you update ! |
Steph7085 chapter 15 . 10/16/2014 Such an interesting plot and you have executed it well. Its definitely an interesting spin on the time travel aspect. I really, really hope that you find the inspiration to continue this. It is too good to leave unfinished. |