That's so cute, I think Orophin is a bit like me in this

A great story. Very well written.

Hehe...that's so cute! I love how Orophin is passed out on the bed...

As you've guessed by now I'm sure, I'm being very bad and not working on the little scene I promised, but rather am procrastinating by reading Captured Heart stuff. Mae, I had forgotten how very much I loved this story! It's been forever since I read this but after looking at the oneshot you sent me last night I really needed to come and immerse myself in this world again. I'm getting all sorts of ideas now.

Cee

Yay, another young-Zinnia story! As much as I like the later chapters of "Captured Heart" the young Zinnia is just so touching. You created a great and very unique character and Im sure everyone would enjoy more stories about her. Companion pieces to your main work are a great idea, please keep it up!

i loved this fic. your stories always bring a smile to my face. :) lol. this was great. i thought it was fairly amusing watching Orophin try to calm Zia down. I could just picture it perfectly in my head, him running around trying to distract her. heh

great story. i may have to read the other two again.

snakefeather

I love ur stories. Very touching, you will definitely have to write the story about Rumil. It adds to Captured Heart, one of my favorite stories on fanfic. Thank you and keep writing.

Aww, she's the sweetest! And poor Orophin... Children can be quite a pain sometimes... ) I really enjoy your little one-shot-stories like this one, they're nice to read, not too long or too short and yet, wrong to put into the 'actual' story. I think this is a great idea, to have it like this. keep it coming! )

elanhín

That was so touching for Orophin and Zinnia to bond like that.

ohh another side story. i LOVE it! the stories add more body and texture to the original story and builds up the background and characters i guess. i hope u get to update Captured Hearts soon. its been a while.

This was so wonderful. The world you have created with this family is precious, and you do it so well. I was having one of those horrid days that come now and then, but this really brightened everything up for me :)

AW! That was so sweet! I love your stories you are an amazing writer! more please!

I just LOVED Captured Heart and Ailment...guess what? I loved The Pied Piper of Lorien. I really enjoy your writing style. Thank you for sharing your stories.