Reviews for Wasuremono: The Things We Leave Behind
Mistress Fire-Hazard chapter 1 . 6/17/2004
First of all, thank you for the kind words at the beginning of the "Legend of Drunken Matrimony" story! Secondly, "useless" needs to be changed to "unless" and other editing problems. I made some other corrections in your first draft I read the other day, so I leave you to make the rest. Thirdly, and most importantly, very auspicious start! Everyone is in character and very funny as always! You are one of the few great authors of cannonical-like fan fiction. Everything you have done so far have made my expectations of you rise and rise. I know this is gonna be really good, cause I know you! Oh! And come by the house tomorrow. We did skip the first half of the hour long episode. Also come by cause me and E love hangin' with ya! Good writing times! Ja ne!
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