|Reviews for Longwinded|
| Miss Tako chapter 1 . 2/14/2015
That's adorable and Ryou is a little shit XD
| YGOfangirl4ever chapter 1 . 12/19/2012
:))))))) lmao Looool... Poor Bakura :)) Being an evil, psichotic villain not working out for verry well, is it? ))
| run-for-your-life-hikari chapter 1 . 1/19/2009
lol Ryou...lol Bakura...lol So, cute! (not in the ravish kind of way...I think...) This was good! Loved it!
| hygjfyh chapter 1 . 10/15/2008
Such a good story. My favourite parts were.
When he said cute what he really meant was ect.
"I'm the only one you will ever have," "Hm,"
| hA-UkA chapter 1 . 3/9/2008
Rather funny, poor Bakura having holes poked in all his plots by his Hikari.
| Sailor Pandabear chapter 1 . 1/4/2007
| Miracle Lily chapter 1 . 3/12/2006
"Of course, we can always go to bed early for once," Bakura proposed, hearing his cue. "You're looking a bit pale and tired, Ryou. I think you need some rest."
"And I'm going to get that by going to bed?" Ryou snorted.
That was hilarious. XD
| Sour Schuyler chapter 1 . 10/21/2005
Lol! Totally cute idea! I would have never thought to have Ryou interrupt Bakura over and over agian. It was very cool. I also like how you compared what Bakura would have said with powers, versus what he said now without powers.
| Ele Goddess of Elements chapter 1 . 10/16/2005
lmao, that last line was hilarious!
| CircadianDance chapter 1 . 10/13/2005
aw I just got the most adorable picture of Bakura in my head... this was so cute! I love rXb fics!
| garyoak286 chapter 1 . 7/17/2005
LMAO!i like it! this used to be my fav couple but i guess i'll only read it now if it is humour
| imagines writes chapter 1 . 2/14/2005
Rest? Like heck he's going to get rest. -snicker-
This was funny! I liked Ryou's retorts to everything. Poor Bakura, he can't get a word in edgewise. XD
| misori chapter 1 . 10/18/2004
XD I found it very fun to read about Ryou being so... I dunno.
And of course, Bakura's attempts to tell his hikari he loves him is very very funny. _
X_X /sighs/ I LOVE YOU! XP
| WhiteLightning chapter 1 . 10/11/2004
XD That was absolutely hilarious! That last line especially! I loved it!
| MissDbzMedabots chapter 1 . 8/18/2004
Ohh wow I read this little piece before, but I forgot to review it [or was messing around] I like it !