|Reviews for The Sun|
| Amazonian21 chapter 1 . 8/25/2004
Heh, I usually don't read other fandoms because I'm addicted enough as it is, but I thought, 'hm... CSI, eh?' and checked them out.
You have a very tight style. I can tell you're a character writer, and I enjoy reading stories driven by dialog and interaction. I'm kind of making a mass review because the individual stories don't make a lot of sense to me since I know nothing about CSI short of the few episodes I've caught (and they're brilliant). I think you have good flow and great skills.
You should post whatever you have on your lab fic. Most people make their stories ongoing- that way they evolve as you do. Plus, reviews make it more fun. And you can still be in E.S.T.E.E.M. if you want to- other people like crossing fandoms frequently.
| csipal chapter 1 . 7/8/2004
I must have missed this story when it first posted...glad I found it.
"They had already talked and she hadn't said a word."-loved that line.
| And Also With You chapter 1 . 6/16/2004
This was a great ending to that episode. Emotion-packed, but not draining. Nice subtle resolution. Great job.