Reviews for Swing for the Fences
Aerophoenix's Too Lazy too Log In chapter 3 . 4/7/2012
Ive got to say This. . . . . .SUICHI Cracks me up, you really got the Rival School characters down. But getting back to the point, I have to admit the scene between Shoma and Natsu was brilliant. No OOC What so ever. Whether your done with this fic or dont plan on finishing, Id like to say that this will now be added to another of my Favorites. Thank you for such a Splendid Story Dude STAY FWESH
Aerophoenix's Too Lazy to Log In chapter 2 . 4/7/2012
This was a Very nice chapter indeed, I really like how you showed the bond between Shoma and Natsu. Favorite couple in the series
Aerophoenix's Too Lazy Too Log In chapter 1 . 4/7/2012
!Lmao!,Talk about a funny way 2 end a chapter. Interesting Shoma fanfic Hey and love the writing style. Stay Fwesh Dude
The Muse Sway chapter 3 . 4/11/2009
Damn it I wrote a huge two paragraph review on how much I liked this story and I'm not sure you even got it!... Anyways I love the characterization of Natsu and Shoma. The story was really good a few grammar mistakes but nothing to disrupt the flow. KUDOS! Also really review with a lot less detail in my favorite parts and in short. KUDOS!
PeTeTe809 chapter 1 . 9/16/2006
Im a man of few words...

Not reely...

I jus dont have anithyng to say but...

Great Story...

I hope u continue it...

Ive notcied that rival schools iz a section here that is not very popular, which is very sad cuz i miself am in luv with this series...

Keep up the Great work...
Blue silver Ayu chapter 3 . 8/21/2005
Yes, Shoma is very S-T-U-P-I-D!

The bad thing is you have spelling errors!

But this story is fun to read.

Kasi, third-favorite ko si Shoma lalo na si Natsu!
Macross-Green chapter 3 . 12/17/2004
I think this is the first time I've bothered to read a Rival Schools fic. Natsu and Shoma have always been favorits of mine, since the first game, an I absolutely loved kicking ass with 'em in Project Justice. The characters are well done, and I like your presentation of their personalities together.

I fully expect Natsu to use Momo as a volleyball. Well done, and I think I'll have to start reading around in this section more often!
FaTaL DiStRaCtIoN chapter 3 . 10/15/2004

Wow you are an exceptional writer, well done! This flows very nicely and hold's your attention which is a very hard thing to do! Congrats! I also want to say thanks for your support of my story Finding Freedo, in the COR listing. If it wasn't for you I never would have continued it! On a final note, I think you have great talent and this proves it!
Nyasho chapter 3 . 10/14/2004
Oh my goodness... This turned out to be a really good fic _~ Congratulations! I'm in awe... OwO
Nyasho chapter 1 . 6/19/2004
This is a really cool Shoma fic _ Then only thing I could comment about is that the fic is mainly composed of dialogues. If you were to add scenic plots, I think it'd make the fic better. The story is fine by itself, in fact it's great! Good job. I'll be waiting for a continuation~
SluggerLousville chapter 1 . 6/17/2004
Bout time a good shoma story came along. Great job everybody should give this fic a shot
Baseballguy76 chapter 1 . 6/17/2004
Nice story though there are spelling errors, keep writing cause I'll be reading