|Reviews for My Mother|
| PacWoman chapter 9 . 6/17/2007
I didn't know you were in this fandom too. You're everywhere! *hides under the table* I'm glad too because you're a good writer.
I love this story. It's amazing. I have my own little theory on why Malik's mom died. (It's a bit unrealistic, but it would make a good story.) This story was a really good read. You should write more about the prophets.
| Bailong and Kasuhiro chapter 9 . 2/23/2005
Yeah, Malik's mom did seem to be pretty young. *I'm going to Demondar Pillar*
I love this fic!
Bailong and Kasuhiro
aka Jet and Clive
| xsasukerebornx chapter 9 . 7/8/2004
meep! it's sad. . more or not? Malik is cool too almost as cool as I first thought that Janearth was when I started the game.
| Saddened Soul chapter 9 . 7/8/2004
Curious... Very curious... Yes, Malik did become a member of the council...
| El Dorado chapter 9 . 7/8/2004
That's a really noble goal, but how long will he have to wait? And will other bad things happen to him? This is such a tragic story but I like it anyways. You have to update soon...
| El Dorado chapter 8 . 7/8/2004
This was so sad... why did she have to die? I mean of course she had to die but why is Francis so evil. And Malik got shot... Tragedy tends to have tragic events though. Good job on a sad chapter.
| Saddened Soul chapter 8 . 7/6/2004
Damn you Francis! Oh, I got ahead of myself there... Sorry.
Malik's all alone... Um, I wonder if this theory of mine is right?
| Jonaleepuff chapter 7 . 7/3/2004
Aw, M & M time! (Malik and Mamma/Maria)Very sweet! :)
| Saddened Soul chapter 7 . 7/2/2004
Malik, you better know what're doing, or it could end up real bad... for everyone.
| El Dorado chapter 7 . 7/2/2004
So the plan is going well... Sort of... what if they can't keep it a secret. What if they can't get away? Agh... I'm actually sitting here worrying about Malik and his mother. You manage to make the characters so lovable. Well... I can't say I like Francis too much...
| El Dorado chapter 6 . 7/1/2004
I don't think the too unrealistic... after all what else can they do? I can't wait to read more... I'm a bit scared for Malik and Maria though...
| Jonaleepuff chapter 6 . 7/1/2004
Go Malik, go! I hope this plan works out for the better! Though it probably wont! ( _*) Things habe to get better!
| Jonaleepuff chapter 5 . 7/1/2004
I feel so bad for Maria! And Malik! No! Someone should do something!
| Jonaleepuff chapter 4 . 7/1/2004
W00t! Fun, fun, and the step dad comes in!
Play Enter the Step-dad's theme song
Things are about to turn into drama. _
| Saddened Soul chapter 6 . 6/30/2004
Quite interesting, but it's possible Francis finds out and things start to go downhill.