this is awesome

this is cute, and funny. pls let her call him fluffy or shessy soon

:D

Wow.. Realmente no me espere este final. Pero sigue siendo genial. Y amo a este Sessh

Lo triste de todo esto es que Inuyasha en el anime hizo esto varias veces. Dejar a Kagome indefensa por "salvar" a Kikyo. Sin embargo está vez ella tiene a Sessh.

Me encanta que Sessh sea asi con Rin, ella es muy tierna. Y Kagome ¿Como puedes reírte de él?
Jajajaja, aunque bueno, yo tampoco es como si no lo hubiera hecho.
A pesar de que este Sesshomaru es más "suave" que el del anime, es un agradable cambio el que le diste.
Y fue muy lindo cuando se sintió avergonzado.
La historia se ve prometedora.

Sorry but I don’t like the ending...

Seriously this is a stupid battle I ever read... too lousy and pathetic Kagome become stupid and such a burden... and seriously why turn your back from your enemy knowing that will leave you unprotected.

I love it

Much better. I loved the chapters end! My only suggestion would be to include moe actual dialogue. Example: "He then looked at the young girl and asked her why she continued to come back to this era when she was in constant danger here. Kagome thought about this and told him that she cared greatly for her friends here and would never abandon them." This whole paragraph could have been a real dialogue occurring between them. Dialogue is important to make the reader feel like they're truly involved in the story, witnessing the characters in action.

Good but sesshomaru fight was very forced, fast, and completely lacked detail of any kind. The end on this chapter was... lazily written. No offense. The rest was good. Just the end was rushed and frankly a little silly.

The way the story is written needs some work. In certain places it doesn't flow good from one sentence to another. I really loved the ending though.

This story was amazing! Very well done. Thank you for the adventure.

i have got to say. i loved the end bloopers! they were priceless!

I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE!