|Reviews for Darkness Within The Light of a Champion|
| Ah-choo chapter 2 . 6/21/2004
Don't rush future chapters like you did with this one. This went to rushed for me.
| Malz chapter 1 . 6/18/2004
Oh plkease write more, becuase i bet i wont see another story with a cold hearted mysterious demon lord using a mortal as a pawn. That and the fact he may or may not double croos cloud by killing tifa. Then again i just hope the blooshed is good. Write more!
| Dark chapter 1 . 6/18/2004
you need to write another chapter
| Ah-choo chapter 1 . 6/17/2004
Pretty interesting. Just seperate your rant from the story and you're all set. ;)