Reviews for Melted Snowflakes and Faded Hopes
Werevampiwolf chapter 1 . 8/6/2009
OMFG! i love this! so sad! poor Piotr! 500/5
hello-hero chapter 1 . 4/24/2009
beautiful, /beautiful/ story. gah; i love it so!

excellent story!
Darlin chapter 1 . 6/25/2004
Very well done!
Viral chapter 1 . 6/22/2004
I enjoyed this story. It was a great trip inside the mind of Piotr, something not often found in fan fiction.

Your style of writing reminds me of my own. Very *schooled*. Learned writing skills aren't always the most lucid, but I like the way you write (in this story). It's nice to read a story where I'm not bombarded with bad grammar and spelling in every paragraph (everyone makes mistakes now-and-then) so I can actually focus on the story itself.

Speaking of the story, I have no criticism for improvement. It's a very nice interpretation of what was going through Piotr's head. Keep writing. You're doing great. :)
Harry2 chapter 1 . 6/19/2004
Rasputin, you may not have liked what happened, but you have to remember, even if Illyana had not gotten involved, as long as Stryfe had unleased Legacy, she STILL WOULD HAVE DIED! Get over your grief and move on!
Yogie16 chapter 1 . 6/18/2004
Aw! its sad! but good! r u goin to keep goin wif it?