|Reviews for Captive of the Dark|
| GUest chapter 20 . 12/12/2013
Thank you, I enjoyed this story! Perhaps all those post-traumatic people and their reactions weren't entirely credible - but the delightful OCs in this story definitely make that up! Oh, the OCs! Whether main characters or sidekicks, I liked them, I sympathized with them, I got a feeling for who they actually were. Threedimensional; with hopes, motives, problems, characteristics, and even *character development* (most writers don't even give the canon main protagonists any of that). This is how good characters are supposed to look like!
| the freelance dreamer chapter 20 . 5/8/2013
"you think that you were made to destroy me. The only thing I know, is that you were made for me."
awesome story, and some wonderful implementation and development of your own characters. I loved every bit of it.
| Angel of FallenRoses chapter 20 . 2/21/2013
write B! it sounds cooler! although i probably would read A but anyways wonderful story can't wait to read something else of yours!
| rose chapter 20 . 1/20/2013
one of my favorites!
| VampirePrinssess chapter 20 . 1/7/2012
Me- Oh this was a great story,I loved the ending
Isy- yeah I liked the story two, and that two storys that you mentioned atthe end, they both sound realy interesting
Me- I really hope that you get around to writing any of them
Isy- give it up girl, I don't think she will write them after all she hasn't been active in so long
Me- Isy that was rude, anyway your story was great
Isy- yeah I guess
| xXxStarStrifexXx chapter 20 . 11/19/2011
Brilliant story. I loved the plot and thought it moved on pretty well. Sometimes it seemed unclear why Cadell wanted to kill Krad and Dark but I'm guessing that it was because they made Daere exist? Anyway - I loved it :)
| flippy-animegirl chapter 20 . 3/12/2011
Yay I like this story... I like feminine wiles :) hope you write a sequel
| noah chapter 20 . 3/13/2010
gosh, this is one of the best dnangel fanfics that I have read, and mind you i havent read that many good ones.
Great job! I especially like Dark and Krad's background, how they were created, though not the coughrapecough part.
Continue your great work, and I would like to vote for: Heirs of Darkness and Light
| Isolating chapter 20 . 2/22/2010
D: awshome story~ 3 lol i loves it xD
| animeannie chapter 20 . 8/18/2009
AWESOME STORY! I loved it all the way!
_ tears up from happiness...
I also liked the picture! you're a good artist too! daere has pretty eyes.. but he's not very nice, haha...
well, anyways, just wanted to thank you for writing this... ]
| animeannie chapter 15 . 8/18/2009
btw, loved the picture! Did Daisuke steal Krad's cross and put it on his tail? haha...
| animeannie chapter 11 . 8/18/2009
Hi! I LOVE THIS STORY!
Sorry I didn't review earlier, but I was jsut so caught up with reading.
I'll make sure to review every chapter now. ]
Hmm.. What did I want to say earlier...
Oh! The idea of like, merging the artworks with the babies was so brilliant! And I love how Krad is portrayed in this Fanfic!
| kari613 chapter 20 . 5/21/2009
i absolutley loved this story!
thank you so much ]
and you should do "feminine wiles"
| IncarnateofImpossibilities chapter 20 . 9/2/2008
GYYAH! -GLOMPS TEH AUTHOR AS SPARKLES RAIN DOWN FROM THE HEAVENS- that. was. AWESOME. ...you are kinda sort of a mind-reader! the whole story (which was very well thought-out, kudos) kinda really reminded me of my own story that im trying (in vain) to write! i really liked Leiko/Eriko/Cadell. they are really good OC's (for the sake of argument they are all separate in my mind), i fell in love with Eriko... -glomps Eriko plushie- anyway, good job with the story, really! and if its not too late to have a say in which story you write next, i think you should write the 'Feminine Wiles' just because Emiko's super-FANTASTIC mother-henning skillz combined with mood-swingy Krad would just make my LIFE!
| The First Sight chapter 20 . 8/30/2008
This story was so brilliant! I loved it! I congratulate you on the accomplishment.