Reviews for Lines Crossed
SiriuslyPink chapter 7 . 5/7/2013
The drama, yelling, and fighting is bordering on pathetic. I've had this thought ever since chapter two. You've really overdone it. All this drama and fighting between Harry and Hermione... Ah. Shoot me now. And then you go and make Harry and Ron scream at each other like banshees...
Axenome chapter 19 . 5/2/2013
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I was pretty sure that you were female before this chapter, but your portrayal of Ron this chapter fairly well cemented it. You really don't understand guys at all. Not trying to be mean about it or anything, but the conversation you depicted would not have happened unless Ron had years of training as a psychotherapist. Not that Harry didn't need one, but it's just not something you'd ever get from Ron Weasley. You know, emotional depth of a teaspoon?
Story is entertaining, of course, and very interested in what happens next, just a minor nitpick.
-A
Guest chapter 19 . 2/4/2013
Ron looked sternly down at him. "This is going to be painful, Harry. On both of us. But I think that if we act mature enough, and if you're completely honest with me, we can come out of it relatively unscathed."

Best. Line. Everrrrrrrrrrr.
lyaser53 chapter 28 . 12/17/2012
I'm looking for the sequel now I hope you finished that one too!
Charlemagne Gryffis chapter 10 . 11/28/2012
she's awake!
Charlemagne Gryffis chapter 4 . 11/28/2012
mmm.. ron is an INSUFERABLE GIT SOMETIMES!
Charlemagne Gryffis chapter 2 . 11/28/2012
Chuckling every bloody second, I was.
Guest chapter 28 . 10/9/2012
I love this book so much! I felt like it grew to be apart of me since it took me a month to finish(: it was my first harry and hermonie fanfic. Usually i go for draco and hermonie, but now because of this read i am delighted to read more hermonie and harry! by any chance did you finish the next one, Bend and Not Break, ? I would love to read it. My email is : please let me know so I can read and review that one as well! Again thank you SO much for Posting . I hope you never stop. Xxx
Guest chapter 28 . 10/4/2012
What happened to Voldemort? And Hermione getting back at Malfoy?
Benpowerman chapter 28 . 9/2/2012
very good
luckintheair04 chapter 28 . 7/8/2012
Loved it LOADS!
codyw1 chapter 28 . 1/9/2012
This was terrific, funny, sad at times, and sweet. Top marks. :)
rei.vhen chapter 28 . 11/26/2011
hey i really enjoyed your story.. i was hoping to read the continuation of it.. i really hope you continue writing it until every unresolved issue is covered.. Thumbs up!
dennisud chapter 6 . 7/25/2011
I think you captured fumbles well. Can't wait to see more!
dennisud chapter 2 . 7/25/2011
First thanks for considering the possibility of this pairing as many don't even though the chemistry between the characters is so palpable!

Next you are a great writer of romance banter and it's obvious whomever your writing they have that bond so obviously you root for them

Finally I think that this hiding won't last too long!
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