Reviews for Lines Crossed
codyw1 chapter 28 . 1/9/2012
This was terrific, funny, sad at times, and sweet. Top marks. :)
rei.vhen chapter 28 . 11/26/2011
hey i really enjoyed your story.. i was hoping to read the continuation of it.. i really hope you continue writing it until every unresolved issue is covered.. Thumbs up!
dennisud chapter 6 . 7/25/2011
I think you captured fumbles well. Can't wait to see more!
dennisud chapter 2 . 7/25/2011
First thanks for considering the possibility of this pairing as many don't even though the chemistry between the characters is so palpable!

Next you are a great writer of romance banter and it's obvious whomever your writing they have that bond so obviously you root for them

Finally I think that this hiding won't last too long!
xDarkShadowLoverx chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
it's such a good story!
I Will Make You Rebel chapter 2 . 5/5/2011
MeowDamnation chapter 28 . 11/17/2010
hi! i just finished reading your story after five days (if you wonder why it took me so long to finish, i'm still attending university, you know) and i loved it! thanks for making it simple and not M-rated. (i really get bothered when i read very detailed kissing parts and for that i'm sorry) i love your stories and i think you're a gifted writer. most of all, thank you for loving H/Hr.

Jlee93 chapter 28 . 9/28/2010
Great job! :)
almac1991 chapter 28 . 7/12/2010
this story was aweomse. not only did have Harry & Hermione lovy parts, it had humor...which i loved! this story made me laugh so much! thanks for writing it! it was AWESOME!
Bekah94 chapter 25 . 3/18/2010
"Neville," he said in a robotic voice. "I'm delighted by the news that you're snogging my sister. What a wonderful thing to have happened. Please accept my congratulations."

rofl i'm still laughing rom that!
sarah-rose76646 chapter 27 . 3/9/2010
what the heck? You do know that it is cheating, right? Your story's genre is humor. You might wanna change that or read a dictionary. Its angsty, tragic, daramatic, hurt/comfort/friendship, in fact it is all of these or even one of it. BUT IT IS DEFINITELY NOT HUMOR. please check on it. I m not a critic or a fairly good author myself but i like humor stories and read this because it was in that category. Then i see that its not and guess what? I feel cheated. After 10th chapter, i had it become clear. I stopped reading after 13th and moved on to the second last chapter directly to see that if it had changed. Guess what? The theme is still angsty, and no, adding a joke or a small funny scene doesn't make this fic humor story. Change it so that no one else would feel cheated because what they thought they were reading humor story but it was full of angst and drama. I am sure if you change it to angst/drama category, people who like that genre will read it and like it. It is a nice story, after all. And nicely written too. Just felt cheated because i thought it was humor, like it was stated in genre. Change that please. Toodles
Mr.Destructo chapter 7 . 2/24/2010
ok WTF and i quote "I'll give it to you if you want. I'll… I'll break up with Hermione. I'll do anything, Ron." Harry pleaded desperately. "You're friendship is way more important, okay?" what the hell was that shit ? this is totaly gay speach its proven now this storys harry is a faggot he just said hed give it to ron now im inclined to belive he was offering his vírginety of al his holes to ron cause any man whose willing to say what he said and offer to break up with his other best friend whos female to make his male best friend happy and claim and i again quote "I'll break up with Hermione... Harry pleaded desperately. "You're friendship is way more important, okay?" the dude is totaly a fruitcake i neede to take a break from this story because i just lost like 50 IQ from reading those lines story needs to be labled h/r in my opinion
Mr.Destructo chapter 6 . 2/24/2010
good god another total sausage feast if i ddnt know harry and hermione were together id say harry and ron were fealing sexual tension for each other once again harry comes out as a pu55y his p3nis must be gone and hes gained a new hole and he must be eyeballing ron fkin fag3t
Mr.Destructo chapter 5 . 2/24/2010
god i totaly hate harrys additude so far he just made a move on his best FEMALE friend then treats her like shit and spends most the day/night pining over thye reaction of his best MALE friend i mean wtf if he was gay he shouldave asked ron out dont get me wrong i totaly dislike slash and would probly drop the story if i had to read m/m but shit this is not much differant except tyhe guys arnt kissing even if harrys acting like hes on the rag dude needs to man up fck everyones eleses opinion and go kiss hermione for several hours in some secluded area and quit acting like hed be lost withought rons sausage fking pu55y i swear ok im done flamming other than harrys additude love the story so far i just hate harry acting like rons opinion matters so much i mean i get the first male friend of his age level hes probly ever made but shit he just got the girl man up and act like it sry im flamming again lol gonna shut up and read thew next chapter now D
Scabbers1957 chapter 2 . 1/19/2010
ROFL oh this is gunna be good...I can't wait for the fireworks to begin when they FINALLY tell him...gunna make the A-bomb look like a ladyfinger firecracker.

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