Reviews for Unfinished Business
starfire25 chapter 7 . 5/30
interesting story. i like it a lot. i hope you continue writing.
KK chapter 7 . 5/27/2014
You are very descriptive and I hope you keep writing. I love your work!
KK chapter 5 . 5/27/2014
You are such a great writer! This story is so great and incredibly detailed and I can't wait for it to go on.
It's All About Them chapter 2 . 4/15/2013
hmmm... who is this Larnia girl...
It's All About Them chapter 1 . 4/15/2013
one chapter down and all is good...
Olimpia chapter 7 . 11/29/2011
Hey Wow im so glad uve picked the story up again! I absolutely loved in! I suppose its because i love SWAT! But great story and great updates! I think.. wow... i think i checked this fic out 3 year ago maybe! But it is still amazing! Hoping for more :D
Simoman chapter 6 . 9/21/2006
Good chapter! Great emotion shown! Keep it up!
DreamShadows chapter 6 . 12/10/2005
Oh that story was so good!

I almost cried, especially at the memories.

I hope that you update soon!
BelgiumWaffleMaker55 chapter 6 . 11/9/2005
Wow, that's really awesome. If they were to ever make a sequel, the movie-makers should consult you and what you've written. Good action, story, just like the movie. I really enjoyed it, and I'll anticipate the coming chapters.
fuwa fuwa shite iru chapter 6 . 9/8/2005
sorry i didn't review i was so into the story i couldn't tear my eyes away. i needed to keep reading. i like the story thus so far!
fuwa fuwa shite iru chapter 3 . 9/8/2005
HIS WIFE!AUGGHGH! keep writing!
fuwa fuwa shite iru chapter 2 . 9/8/2005
i loved it! just like my first review keep writing!
fuwa fuwa shite iru chapter 1 . 9/8/2005
I loved it. you need to keep writin mor, and more, and more, and more, and more, and more ,and more...
Soccer-Bitch chapter 6 . 9/4/2005
cool story. i liked it. i hope that you update soon. _
MartinaCruz chapter 6 . 6/9/2005
Loved this chapter and so happy you decided to continue this story! Cant wait to see what happens next!
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