Reviews for Unfinished Business
It's All About Them chapter 2 . 4/15/2013
hmmm... who is this Larnia girl...
It's All About Them chapter 1 . 4/15/2013
one chapter down and all is good...
Olimpia chapter 7 . 11/29/2011
Hey Wow im so glad uve picked the story up again! I absolutely loved in! I suppose its because i love SWAT! But great story and great updates! I think.. wow... i think i checked this fic out 3 year ago maybe! But it is still amazing! Hoping for more :D
Simoman chapter 6 . 9/21/2006
Good chapter! Great emotion shown! Keep it up!
DreamShadows chapter 6 . 12/10/2005
Oh that story was so good!

I almost cried, especially at the memories.

I hope that you update soon!
BelgiumWaffleMaker55 chapter 6 . 11/9/2005
Wow, that's really awesome. If they were to ever make a sequel, the movie-makers should consult you and what you've written. Good action, story, just like the movie. I really enjoyed it, and I'll anticipate the coming chapters.
fuwa fuwa shite iru chapter 6 . 9/8/2005
sorry i didn't review i was so into the story i couldn't tear my eyes away. i needed to keep reading. i like the story thus so far!
fuwa fuwa shite iru chapter 3 . 9/8/2005
HIS WIFE!AUGGHGH! keep writing!
fuwa fuwa shite iru chapter 2 . 9/8/2005
i loved it! just like my first review keep writing!
fuwa fuwa shite iru chapter 1 . 9/8/2005
I loved it. you need to keep writin mor, and more, and more, and more, and more, and more ,and more...
Soccer-Bitch chapter 6 . 9/4/2005
cool story. i liked it. i hope that you update soon. _
MartinaCruz chapter 6 . 6/9/2005
Loved this chapter and so happy you decided to continue this story! Cant wait to see what happens next!
MartinaCruz chapter 5 . 5/28/2005
Hey I love this story! And I know that its been a really long time but... I really want to know what happens! Please finish it!
busigt-81 chapter 5 . 8/6/2004
Its a really good storie please contiune
Capt.Cow chapter 5 . 7/19/2004
YES! DEfinitely go on! Why are you still here reading this review? Go on, you're meant to be writing you have chapters to finish!
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