Reviews for Within Wheels
The White Dwarf chapter 1 . 7/1/2004
Damn! You really have a talent for writing, and you really know what it's like in combat (I assume. Not like I've been in combat to know...) Keep writing!
wordbearer chapter 1 . 6/20/2004
Nice work. This is some of the most effective 40k prose I've seen here. Nicely paced combat, broken up inner monologue.