Reviews for Taking Over Me
erilcartul chapter 10 . 11/13/2009
among all the BBxrae storys none can be compared to yours ill be looking forward to your other storys but i didnt like the words you used like bitching on the story but its your choice. keep up the good work
maximum rider chapter 6 . 11/9/2009
okay im still questioning the BB Raven romance, but its still going steady. so its all good!

Lov. BlackMoons forever servent RavenWing
maximum rider chapter 5 . 11/9/2009
okay now that ive got my LUCKY JACKET on i can grade you good.

1. beast boy is a little too mean/sour

2. Raven needs to have way less self pittying

3. and i really shouldnt be telling uou how to write your charachters...sorry.

4. and your doing really great with the writeing

Lov. BlackMoons forever servent RavenWing
maximum rider chapter 4 . 11/9/2009
okay after two chapters of this "push and pull each other" its getting kinda old

Lov. BlackMoon's forever servant RavenWing
maximum rider chapter 3 . 11/9/2009
again youve amazed me. and now that i read your notes ur definitly right, it is a whole lot cooler this way.

lov. BlackMoon's forever servent RavenWing
maximum rider chapter 2 . 11/9/2009
again very well rounded, i think you did very well in this.

but i still thik that either beastboy has to be more himself or they have to like,make out or something.
maximum rider chapter 1 . 11/9/2009
i thought it was well rounded and through.

But you should probobly make beastboy alittle more happy. i meen i know he just lost terra and all but still.

all in all you did well

and trust me im hard to impress
Kyle aka Darkness chapter 10 . 10/19/2009
I love this fic,i said love!
Izzy chapter 10 . 10/11/2009
That was beautiful...I'm so sorry that those things happened with your dog, but I still think your story was the more passionate for it. You have the characters just right, and I look forward to more.
Danny chapter 10 . 9/14/2009
This story was awesome man! i read all the chapters and couldn't stop reading until i know what happen next! thank you for writting this up and have good life bye.

p.s.- sorry about your dog and you being schol, etc etc.
nekoken chapter 11 . 9/10/2009
Great story, the finely got together the suspense was killing me lol
fall chapter 1 . 8/26/2009
totaly asome! you should write another chapter!
jfk chapter 11 . 6/14/2009
Absolutely awesome nothing bad about please must get sequel
MadienOfTheMoonlight17 chapter 11 . 5/2/2009
Very well written, although you do have some spelling and grammar mistakes, but that's something proof reading can't fix. Lovely story line.
Straight Edge Aingeal chapter 1 . 3/13/2009
wow great story!
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