|Reviews for Taking Over Me|
| Go to my Real Account with Ter chapter 3 . 7/2/2004
IT'S GREAT! YOU MUST KEEP WRITING!
| S. Mark Gunther chapter 3 . 7/1/2004
...You know, I've been looking for a BB/Raven romantic story that keeps them very in character while showing the passion they have for each other. This is what I've been looking for.
I honestly, honestly have nothing to complain about in this story. They length of each part is good (I like 2500-4500 word chapters), the pacing is strong and clear, the characters are crisp and defined...and such a balance of tension and slackness.
I am really looking forward to this story...but do me a favor: don't bring Terra back. Make this story strictly on the drama of Beast Boy and Raven. You have such a tight, taut, passionate drama that putting in a dramatic bouy like that would cheapen the value of their interactions, IMO.
But regardless, I await your next chapter. Don't make me wait long...but if it's for quality, then by all means take your time. Holla back.
| raven1322 chapter 3 . 7/1/2004
cant wait for the rest
| Snea chapter 3 . 7/1/2004
Oh, and I got a new idea for my next Raven and Beast boy fic. It kind of came to me when I watched The Grim Adventures of Billy and Mandy today. I definitely plan to do that after this one, but let's concentrate on one thing at a time. As of now, it's basically only humor, but if it goes the right way I might make it romance.
Don't you just luv getting inspiration from the most alein places? I mean, I'm working on a TT fic, and i got the idea from watching Carrie while reading a romance poem for World Lit. - -' see what i mean?
| smm chapter 3 . 7/1/2004
Awesome beginnings. You're a really good writer. I can't wait to read the end. :)
| warprince2000 chapter 3 . 7/1/2004
Cool story! can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter (update soon Plz)
| The Mad shoe chapter 3 . 6/30/2004
Oww, all this wierd stuff is hurting my BRAIN!
Keep it up.
| oughttobedeleted chapter 3 . 6/30/2004
This is great, I can't wait for the next chapter!
| A Splash of Sunshine chapter 3 . 6/30/2004
This was absolutely beautiful.
Keep up the good work
| uhouse chapter 3 . 6/30/2004
Dude whatever you do, do not I repeat do not put Terra in this story it's to good for her. I'll still read it if you do cause I really love the story but I just don't like her. Oh and update soon
| Goten0040 chapter 3 . 6/30/2004
Coolie beans. I like it. I hope that the chapters aren't too uneventful. ' The Terra idea seems awesome. That would really test their relationship, wouldn't it?
| raven2xhh chapter 3 . 6/30/2004
okay. this my friend, is great. i really like this! keep it up and keep going until you finish! I really wanna see how this ends. so PLEASE, PLEASE update at least once a week! i've read a lotta FFs that end and i come back to them and theyre never updated! it really gets annoying so PLEASE, i'm BEGGING you, UPDATE! okay, now that we've got that outta the way, a word of advice, dont bring terra back in. i find it really annoying when people 'come back to life' it's just, bothersome. BUT, yes there is a but, if you can figure out how to do it without making it stupid, go for it. like have BB and rae rescue her or something. so... yeah... well then, keep writing!
| TsukasaSIGN chapter 3 . 6/30/2004
awesome fic dude, can't wait for the next chappie
| troubled-ego chapter 3 . 6/30/2004
What else is new? Another great chapter like always! I just loved the conversation between Beast boy and Raven and I loved the part where BB tucks Raven in for the night. That was a nice and romantic part of the story. So, you're adding some humor to the story now? That should be good. I never acually read too much of your humor but I know it'll turn out well. I wonder which episode of The Grim Adventures of Billy and Mandy you watched for inspiration. And I seriously thought that I was the only one who watched that show...hm guess not. But I'll wait for your next chapter since the story gets better and better with each one.
| Bleeding Grey chapter 3 . 6/30/2004
Tension. I love it!