Reviews for Moon Pleasure
Edhla chapter 1 . 5/2/2013
I'm guessing you're... young? You have a solid premise here, but the writing has a lot of errors that may be preventing people from giving your fic the attention it deserves, and it's in the wrong category. If it's an original work rather than a fanfic of something else, you can put it up at Fictionpress. Good luck.
Blue Rose Doujinshi chapter 1 . 5/18/2009
It's an interesting story and all, but the grammar is awful! And how is this connected to the 3x3 Eyes Universe?

(btw, If you need an editor, message me)
InMyDream chapter 1 . 8/19/2007
It's a good fanfic. But why does this belon in the 3x3 Eyes category? Who are the characters here?

But I like the story.
Redeath chapter 1 . 8/2/2005
I did NOT like it! Try to make the interduction more interesting, and the talking more realistic, please!