|Reviews for Moon Pleasure|
| Edhla chapter 1 . 5/2/2013
I'm guessing you're... young? You have a solid premise here, but the writing has a lot of errors that may be preventing people from giving your fic the attention it deserves, and it's in the wrong category. If it's an original work rather than a fanfic of something else, you can put it up at Fictionpress. Good luck.
| Blue Rose Doujinshi chapter 1 . 5/18/2009
It's an interesting story and all, but the grammar is awful! And how is this connected to the 3x3 Eyes Universe?
(btw, If you need an editor, message me)
| InMyDream chapter 1 . 8/19/2007
It's a good fanfic. But why does this belon in the 3x3 Eyes category? Who are the characters here?
But I like the story.
| Redeath chapter 1 . 8/2/2005
I did NOT like it! Try to make the interduction more interesting, and the talking more realistic, please!