Reviews for Lied
Amilyn chapter 1 . 8/22/2004
I don't know this fandom at all, but VERY nice use of language to create mood (again), character, and tone, and very nice pacing.
Acey Dearest chapter 1 . 6/25/2004
Oh... this is good. Very good. I never knew why people disliked Yamcha so much- they don't really have a reason.

Yamcha's outright misery, and the way you depicted it- and him- was vivid. The rain, and him saying that about the toy... poor, poor Yamcha. At least Kuririn is trying to help him out. I think the end is the best part- it was dark, sad... very nice job.

Sincerely,

Acey

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Nenriel chapter 1 . 6/23/2004
i'm so sorry that all of my reveiws have been so short, and i know that's it's really not fair to you.

1) who the heck are Yamcha (the name reminds me of lamb chops...somehow) and Kuririn (what kinda name is that)...you're gonna try to hurt me now..aren't you...

well, i'm not afriad. I know karate, stick fighting and archery...mwahahahaha
DrAcOmAlFoYiShOt888 chapter 1 . 6/22/2004
This is really well written. I think you did a good job!