|Reviews for Our Last Refrain|
| Cmdr. Gabe E chapter 1 . 3/22/2005
ih wow O.O! this was so beautifully written. the words you have chosen to speak the words of the phantom were perfect for the emosions pouring from the poem :)! i commend you, also, for setting the right mood, tone and timing for his words :)! and it's so sad too, because the phantom feels so defeated, so subtle, in this poem, like he's speaking softly and wholeheartedly. luv it!
| Xaviere Jade chapter 1 . 9/27/2004
Beautiful, dark and deep with a rythmn all its own.
For we never sing so sweetly
As when we sing in pain - an unfortunate truism, well said.
| Fishy chapter 1 . 7/8/2004
That was so beautiful. Perfect.
| Gia D chapter 1 . 6/23/2004
"...I shall not grudge you any thing,
Nor he whose ring you bear..."
Romantically wistful. I love it so.
| ArtificialImagination chapter 1 . 6/22/2004
~THIS! IS! AMAZING! How wonderful! I almost cried...::Takes tissue:: It's just...it's just...no words to describe it. It is beautiful and touching. Okay...I'm going to stop going on and on...I'll just put it on my favs list and use the new 'highly recomment this story to others' option, and leave it at that. Ja Ne!~
| Phantom Aria chapter 1 . 6/22/2004
Very nice poem. I especially liked the lines:
"You blossomed, budded like a rose
Grew pure and sweet and fine
You would have made a perfect wife
Had I but giv'n you time
Poor weeping thing of sun and air,
I did not give you time"
They brought such a vivid picture to my mind. Thanks for sharing this sad poem.
| Rain of Joy chapter 1 . 6/22/2004
i like this a lot! very well written with a good rhyme scheme. I can tell you put lots of thought into this poem and I think that you did very well. And it's so sweet! Not just sweet, but sad too. Very, very well done.