Reviews for First Time Alive
Kais Devil chapter 16 . 10/28/2004
I'm happy you updated

Kai and Hilary are the best couple ever

and

Kai really needs some help

maybe he should ask Hilary

YA!

UPDATE!
n231 chapter 16 . 10/28/2004
Will anyone notice Kai's hurt?

Hutchy 0
Queen of Fantasy chapter 16 . 10/27/2004
Sharks? Ah! JAWS! I'm gonna die! I'm gonna die! Wait, my knight in shining armour will save me!

Haha...just kidding. I really like this chapter. *Glare at Tyson* Hey, you won't really reconsider the pairing Kai/Hil right? Because there is no way Hilary is ever gonna like Tyson more than a friend. That would just ruin this VERY GOOD story!

I got this so brilliant idea for the halloween chapter. I don't have an ICQ. I can't chat in ICQ, IRC or whatever. So give me your email k? I'll tell you my idea. It's not that good but worth a try.(It has got something to do with Kai/Hil romance)
Fantasia-Spirit chapter 16 . 10/27/2004
Wow!I loved the angsty moment with the shark!

So Kai's really leaving huh?I wonder when he and the others will meet again...and I hope the wound will heal all right.
tsubakitea chapter 9 . 10/24/2004
GASP! YOU KILLED REI! NO

::breaths::O

hOW COULD YOU? It a great story though!
Queenie chapter 15 . 10/17/2004
I've read your review for my Chapter 6-Crown of Death. Thanks for your review! Hmm...since I count you as my friend, you don't need to ask permission from me to put anything in your fic. Oh yea, I don't need any credit at all. Just glad to help you.

Sure, I'll help you with your Halloween chapter. Do you have msn? Add me if you have.

P.S. My email is up there!
Queen of Fantasy chapter 15 . 10/15/2004
Well, in my country, PSLE is a VERY important exam. I live in Singapore so it's a very small country. The exam starts at the same time for the whole country. So when it starts at 8.15 am, all of the school will start at that point of time. If you fail, I don't know what's gonna happen but you're in so big trouble.

Okay, let's stop talking about that and talk about this chapter. The 'Boo,' part was in MY fic.*chuckle* But I'm glad you use it in your fic. It makes the story more...exciting.

Well update soon k?
Chibi-Kari chapter 15 . 10/15/2004
don't worry at all about the spelling because they are mostly confusion of words like there instead of their...nothing to worry about i mean english is my first language and i make worse mistakes...lol...i can really imagine tyson glaring at kai...i'm just waiting for it to happen during the show...lol...fantastic chapter...CONTINUE!
Kais Devil chapter 15 . 10/15/2004
I loved you update

thank GOD their not dateing(Tyson and Hilary)

thank GOD kai and hilary are gonna be a couple

UPDATE!

ASAP!
Anonymous chapter 15 . 10/15/2004
Yay Kai!

Good story! Oopla!

Sorry I haven't reviewed the other chapters. I lost it, now found it!
n231 chapter 15 . 10/15/2004
Will Tyson's POV be in the next chapter?

Hutchy 0
Fantasia-Spirit chapter 15 . 10/15/2004
Thank you for not making Ty and Hil date!

Anyways I liked the chap,poor Tyson getting banged up by those pricks...

Am I noticing slight competition between Tyson and Kai?*giggles*
Queen of Fantasy chapter 14 . 10/15/2004
I've updated my story already. The Science was damn hard! What I learned for years didn't even come out! I was frustrated of course. Many cried because they didn't finish the paper. Parents complained! Ugh...The rest was easy peasy though.

Heh, love this chapter! OMG! Suspense! I can't take it! What is Kai gonna do? I know! He's gonna kick their freakin' arses! That'll teach them a lesson or two about messing with his friends!

Poor Kai. He doesn't want to go back to his all-boys school. I know what he feels. I really do. My school in an all-girls christian/catholic school...No boys...at all. So there's probably no chance of me having a boyfriend but I'm out of that school next year! Still, I would probably go to another all-girls secondary school...again.*sigh*

Anyway, update soon! I'll read the halloween chapter to know how people write mushy stuff. I really need to put them in my story more...

So please write more and update soon! I'll always be there for you...

P.S. This is the longest review I've written I think...
Kais Devil chapter 14 . 10/14/2004
NO

DON'T MAKE TYSON AND HILARY DATE!

I REPET!

DO NOT MAKE TYSON AND HILARY DATE!

MAKE KAI AND HILARY DATE!

KAI AND HILARY ARE THE BEST COUPLE EVER!

DON'T YOU AGREE?

UPDATE UPDAT EUPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!
n231 chapter 14 . 10/14/2004
Who attacked them?

Hutchy 0
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