|Reviews for The Things We Hide|
| Guest chapter 38 . 6/15/2013
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| Reader-anonymous-writer chapter 38 . 2/7/2012
She can do much better then that disgraceful boy.
Minerva, are you so set on agreeing with Lucius, Voldemort's right-hand?
I won't let you go, not if I can help it.
I'm nobody! Who are you? Are you nobody, too? Then there's a pair of us -don't tell! They'd banish us, you know.
That's the 'I'm so pissed off I'm that if you breath in my direction the wrong way your going to need a body bag' look.
Good luck, Draco, Ginny, Hermione, Severus. Ill luck to Harry, Minerva, Ron.
| Reader-anonymous-writer chapter 31 . 2/7/2012
Good luck, Hermione, Severus.
I like Draco. I'm sad that Lucius is so cruel, but then, everybody has different point of view on Malfoys.
Besides, that was quite a show you two put on. Did you see everyone's faces?
This is going to be great,
Agree. Especially black feathered wings and deep green leaves.
Not just as a student chaperone, but as a participant in costume as well. Could this day get any worse?
Create a suitable costume. Black, intimidating, and billowing.
How can anybody believe that Draco's and Hermione's banter and innuendos are flaunting of a romantic relationship between them? It's interaction of masks, and if there was any true relationship between them, it wouldn't have been relationship between masks. But then, most Gryffindors don't see difference between mask and person wearing it, can they?
Do you wanna be somebody else?
Probably, but there are some people I don't want to leave behind.
I would be scared to go away, where only strangers I could find.
But a change in the rules, going to another world, I wouldn't mind.
As long as I know where we land, on our feet, knowledge of a kind,
Not omniscience, basical orientation, so that we would not be blind...
Somehow that woman had found a way through all my walls and found a place in my heart. It would never come to anything however; I would see to that.
Why would you see to that?
I could see that she was trying to puzzle out my identity. Hoping to distract her, I lead her out onto the dance floor
She will recognize your graceful movements in the dance.
P.S. Do you ever contemplate the many uses of rusty sporks? Does that make me weird/creepy?
[Dryly] I doubt I have enough imagination for that. But I know something more creepy than that...
Good luck, and thank you.
| Reader-anonymous-writer chapter 25 . 2/2/2012
I have been away for a looong time...
I couldn't tell you why but I trust you…
[Sardonically, with skeptical humour, without cruelty] And that's why you threw him across the room.
Why was it that last night the statue had allowed me access to Hermione's rooms and continued to deny Minerva? Indeed….
Dragon knows that Minerva would demand something of Hermione, while Severus would give her whatever Hermione needs.
This was unexpected. Highly unexpected…
For me, too.
What was it she wanted now that she bothered to put up pretense of sensitivity to needs of her only daughter? I was not looking forward to this meeting.
Me, too. Is she going to attack Hermione?
The real thing is not what we conceive
I know...It's difficult reality to perceive
When a lot of mixed signals you receive...
Harry strode into the Great Hall looking as if he thought he owned the place, and that we were all seated here waiting for him.
I don't like this, at all.
Neville looked at me as if he thought I might attack him,
Honestly, he had grown even more self-possessed and arrogant that even Lockhart had been at his worst. That was a major achievement,
I don't like this, at all.
Draco might become Hermione's friend-brother.
Hermione, looking glass, strived to be
What people around her wanted to see,
But glass sheet couldn't handle the strain,
And glass finally cracked into shards' rain
Under the unexpected doubly sharp blow:
Betrayal of those who has taken the vow
Of marriage and given birth to the child,
Only to disastrously for the 'family' to find
That reality went ahead, left plans behind.
Molly helped Ginny to pick out these clothes? I haven't expected this. I would have sympathized with Harry if it wasn't for his arrogance.
Apparently, whoever I had run into had not been paying any more attention to where they were walking then I had been.
[Biting my thumb in silent laughter]
I told you I would never lie to you Hermione, and I meant it.
Thank you, Severus.
Good luck, Draco, Hermione, Severus. Ill luck to Albus, Harry, Neville, Ron. Honestly, I expected better from Harry and Neville. And extremely bad luck to Minerva.
| Reader-anonymous-writer chapter 17 . 9/29/2011
I will get Severus to apparate you
Why not Minerva? Ah, knowledge of Muggle world.
a new wardrobe
You are distracting yourself. By the way, have you done the summer homework?
That girl had mourned long enough
Infinity is not enough for mourning,
When in despair you are drowning.
She would have to pamper the girl and act like she understood, which she didn't, and shower her with kindness.
Acting and falsehood are not what she needs,
You are watering Hermione's self-doubt seeds,
Growing confusion and distrust, betrayal weeds.
completely away from the muggle district
Is Minerva insane?
Here, use my cloak.
What about warming charm?
I'm disappointed to hear that Harry cares about neither Hermione nor studying. Sad that he follows Ron in toying with others' emotions, and thankful that he doesn't allow them too close.
I don't fancy being a teacup very much either.
If Albus is so afraid of her, why don't you send her against Voldemort?
Good luck to Severus and Hermione. Ill luck to Minerva.
| Ms Llewellyn chapter 15 . 8/4/2011
ah-haha, snape takes his coffee like me...like it so far, hermione tho, her attitude is hella annoying on her. off to read more!
| MatronMalice chapter 1 . 6/3/2011
first let me say this is not a flame. this story has a lot of potential and the first few chapters i read could have been much better if a few things were improved.
your writing is stilted and choppy. The sentences do not flow together into complete and harmonious structures. Your writing is aloof and impersonal. it lacks imagery, making it difficult for the reader to connect to the plot.
the summary was very interesting and i looked forward to reading this. i might give it a go sometime again, but please take my suggestion into consideration. i don't know if you have a beta, but if you don't, you might want to get one to look this over.
good luck in your future writing endeavors.
| Bitterglass chapter 4 . 5/27/2011
THAT HORRIBLE MOTHER FUCKER IF HE WAS REAL I WOULD STAB HIM HOEW CAN HE DO THAT! keep updatin
| stephanie duncan chapter 11 . 5/21/2011
"My world began to disintegrate and fall apart, bit by crumbling bit."
i just so happened to be listening to the cure's disintegration. and the lyrics included the words 'bit by bit'. biggest coincidence of my life :)
| SakuraBlossom58 chapter 9 . 5/20/2011
| Sakura Lisel chapter 5 . 5/19/2011
Okay, what does Dumbledore mean by WHY did Hermione kill her dad? I mean it should be OBVIOUS what her incentive for the killing would have been, especially if Poppy told him exactly what kind of condition Hermione was in when she was brought in. Every bruise, cut, and even the recent rape, that Hermione must have still been sporting when Accidental magic officials and aurors must have seen on her body, especially since her dad ripped off her shirt and pants, yet they are now asking why she did it, despite the condition she's in?
| AnonymousCookieMonster chapter 39 . 7/21/2010
| Full Moon Mitsuki Koyama chapter 39 . 7/11/2010
*clapping*this is a wonderful story!I stayed up most of the night to finish the chapters you have up so far.I also now have a bruise on my head from waiting for them to kiss so long but hey that's the great part of your story. you didn't make them rush straight into things which I applaud you for. I'm looking forward to more of your story and can't wait to see what awaits these relationships!
| LadyJenna33 chapter 38 . 6/9/2010
All I can say is Brava! This is magnificent. I love the human side of Snape. He's always been my favorite character in the books,
| Julianne envy U chapter 38 . 5/18/2010
I'm very glad to hear that you'll be continuing this story! It is beyond outstanding for sure! Your ability to write sensual scenes is enviable haha. I look forward to the next chapter :)