Reviews for The In Between Places
Guest chapter 25 . 3/14/2013
WHOOPS. So sorry for the last ending bit of my first review. Didn't see the A/N at the top. Must be really thick today...or tired. Anyway, can't wait till your sequel comes out. Keep surprising me with your writing talents. Thanks!
Guest chapter 25 . 3/14/2013
Oh good lord, this is bloody fantastic! The plot is amazing, and not many grammatical errors, which make it fabulous. I love your portrayal of the HP characters after 5th year, and how everyone deals with what had happened. I've always wondered from the movie and the book how Harry dealt with the events at the Ministry, and how he was able to seem alright in the 6th book/movie. Your story put a unique touch on that thought. I thoroughly enjoyed this story with its Harry/Hermione pairing. I've always loved that pairing and thought it would seem the best in the end, but JKR's pairings of Harry/Ginny and Ron/Hermione didn't really click for me. I'm glad you made them deal with their new relationships with reason and maturity, not many fanfiction authors do that. Your story made my day. :) Saying this now in 2013, I really do wish that you could have either continued the current story or at least made a sequel to it. So many good authors never finish their stories and it upsets me. Although I say this, if you are unable to it's alright, but so many other readers would love to continue reading. Sorry for the long review, I just really wanted to put my complete thoughts into it for your story. Again, many thanks for such a wonderful tale.
Chaz1302 chapter 26 . 10/19/2012
I think I like the alternate version of chapter 16 better, I love me a angst story between Harry and Hermione. But I like the other version too
Chaz1302 chapter 25 . 10/19/2012
Awwww man I bloody love this story, if only the real story went along the lines of this (exactly the same as this but this wouldnt fill a whole Harry potter book). By far one of the best Fanfics I've ever read! In other fanfics none of them kept to the characters like you have done which makes a nice change. Deffo plan on reading this story over and over, if only you wrote more or done a sequel (sighs)
Chaz1302 chapter 24 . 10/19/2012
The L word had been dropped! hahaha nice tender moment at the end there
Chaz1302 chapter 22 . 10/19/2012
I never did understand if Hermione was older or younger then Harry and you made it perfectly clear what you think, I think she's older too, just something about it seems right (shrugs shoulders) anyway the little showdown between Snape and Harry was awesome!
Chaz1302 chapter 21 . 10/19/2012
Oh wow! hopefully Hermione will be alright, wonder what spell Harry used on them death eaters, must of been pretty powerful
Chaz1302 chapter 19 . 10/18/2012
Again you wrote Ron perfectly! And Harry pouring his soul out and letting some of his bottled emotions go was so heartfelt and emotional, I felt what he was feeling while reading. Brilliant stuff
Chaz1302 chapter 18 . 10/18/2012
The wat Ron reacted was spot on in my opinion, he told Hermione he fancied her ages ago which she said she didn't reciprocate the same feelings and that she loves someone else, so he's had a while to get use to that fact plus Ron said himself he's seen how they both loved each other without the other realising it. Great story
Chaz1302 chapter 17 . 10/18/2012
Good ending to the chapter, must read on so I can see how Ron reacts to Harry and Hermione's news and will he get together with Luna? a nice tender moment they shared
Chaz1302 chapter 16 . 10/18/2012
Best chapter so far! took a while but there finally where they deserve to be, with each other! It came so suddenly but wow you got there feelings and insecurities down perfectly
Chaz1302 chapter 14 . 10/18/2012
And so the seeds of doubt (about whether Harry likes Hermione more then a friend) have begun at last! Wonder what that dream was about... no idea lol
Chaz1302 chapter 13 . 10/18/2012
Loved the interaction in this chapter, from Remus talking about how happy Harry's mum and dad were to the banter between Harry and Remus.
Chaz1302 chapter 12 . 10/18/2012
Still loving this story, you've got ALOT mre self-control then I have as I would of got Harry and Hermione together by now, it's great how you've taken your time with them and let their relationship build super slowly lol hopefully it won't be too long until they start picking up the pace
Chaz1302 chapter 8 . 10/18/2012
I love Fred and George's inventions! Harry with Red hair would be so weird lol
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