Reviews for Sherlock Holmes in Japan
darkryubaby chapter 1 . 1/4/2010
awesome. please update soon.
PraiseDivineMercy chapter 1 . 6/23/2004
The really like the idea of this fic. I love Sherlock Holmes. You write Holmes and Watson very well.

A few suggestions:

Edit for typos.

Skip lines between each section of dialogue. It makes the story much more comprehensible(and makes editing a lot easier too.)

Saito is OOC-while he can be fearsome(wolves always are ne?_) he lives strictly by the code of the samurai and would never resort to such a dishonorable tactic as threatening a man's family. He has a family of his own to care for.

Tsubame was not born then. However Tae (or her twin, Sae) would have been about the same age.

"Are you alright/How are you?""Daijobu ka"

"I am fine." "Genki desu na"