Reviews for Better Than Jack
BlackRoseOnFire chapter 1 . 5/27/2005
Why don't you put all the "Better Than Jack" stories into each one a different would make more sense
Ai-no-Tora chapter 1 . 6/25/2004
Ah there, it's a lot clearer to me now! _ I'm sure I'm not the only one who wants to know about Serena Taylor. She sounds interesting - she and Enright have this weird chemistry going on, if I'm not mistaken, heehee. If you could break up some of the big paragraphs, it'd be MUCH easier to read, thanx! Will keep vigilant watch for an update. *mock salute*
distorted realities chapter 1 . 6/23/2004
seems pretty cool, just work on the formatting. it's a little difficult to get in to because of the flow. alright. update soon
mlholland chapter 1 . 6/23/2004
I think you have a good beginning, but the format that its in is difficult to read. Break up the dialoge and it will flow much better. I'll keep looking for more, I'd like to know more about Serena and her story. I think that this story has great potential - keep it coming! I'm a big TE fan and I love that people writing fiction for the show.