|Reviews for Just One Step|
| Anon chapter 1 . 6/1
I love the family potrait you paint
| angelic-bitch chapter 1 . 11/28/2010
Such a sweet story :)
| Fishy Rainboots chapter 1 . 9/23/2007
Aw...That's so sweet. I absolutely loved it. Great job!
| Verity Kindle chapter 1 . 11/30/2006
Aww!I love fluff! Yay!
| Deandra chapter 1 . 12/21/2005
Yeah, I admit it - this is a thinly disguised campaign to reintroduce you to E/L loveliness and get you to write more of Hold On, Love! I'm utterly shameless - but you knew that!
Besides, both these oneshots are shockingly under-reviewed, which is really quite appalling since they are so good. I strongly suspect my Elfwine Chronicles were influenced by reading such wonderfulness from you.
Still...I AM a beta:
She would run out to *great* him, - should be "greet"
he had to admit they both *enjoined* the process - there is such a word as "enjoined" (but "I do not think it means what you think it means") - should be "enjoyed"
So, have I swayed you yet?
| Hobbitpony chapter 1 . 8/30/2005
I have read this story so many times, in fact if someone gave me a 1.00 for everytime I have read this we could buy the rights to Lord of the Rings!
| Jenny and Clem and That Lot chapter 1 . 3/21/2005
Aaww.. I liked that. Definitely going on my favourites. )
Elfwine is so cute!
| alias.of.me chapter 1 . 2/14/2005
i liked it better than the rest of your sroies even if is your first one i think it was the best
| Sache8 chapter 1 . 10/4/2004
How very sweet! Short, but warm and comforting. I think we can all see instictively that Éomer is a good family man. :)
| Blue Eyes At Night chapter 1 . 9/24/2004
very good, lovely. i love it when ppl bring elfwine into the story
| Lariren-Shadow chapter 1 . 9/6/2004
Oh that was sweet. Little Elfwine! I think he is so cute. And so are the couple. I wish I had Éomer. But I also liked the sort of flashbacks, of what Lothíriel would do. It was cute, with the crawling.
| The Narrator chapter 1 . 6/26/2004
Hi, hi, jadeddiva-chan! You'll never guess who this is! Okay, maybe you will, since I just got your e-mail and had to check out your story... It's so sweet! Fluffy, too! I'll add it to my fave stories and you to my fave author list!
| Eokat chapter 1 . 6/24/2004
Simply lovely, just as I imagined the three to be. Look forward to reading more of your work. Eokat.