Reviews for And They Say Chivalry is Dead
AnimeFreakPerson chapter 1 . 6/24/2004
I'm pleased as well. It was so cute! Can't wait for the next chapter!
TenTen Hyuga chapter 1 . 6/24/2004
YOU MUST UPDATE! I DEMAND THAT YOU DO SO!

(j/k i'm not demanding you do anything)

I really love the fic!

most women remember a rather terriffying experience... bringing the boyfriend home to daddy. XD

amusing... amusing indeed...
Roach Patrol chapter 1 . 6/24/2004
This is a very interesting story. I like it a lot! Please continue it soon.
Dark Lil Corner chapter 1 . 6/24/2004
Oh no! What is Shikamaru going to do?

So... Ino was looking behind her or something when she got hit with the blunt kunai?

Oo and Ino's dad? Oo, scary, scary. Father's don't like it when their precious daughters are hurt. Uh oh, Shikamaru's gotten himself in deep now.

Nice work so far. Good job.

~Sorano
ryotsu-chan chapter 1 . 6/24/2004
I really love ur story im adding it to my favorites!
The Prime Minister chapter 1 . 6/24/2004
*chortles* Oh, I've always liked your stories, but this one seems like it could be particularly funny. I loved Chouji's comment about Ino's dad. Hee hee. I really like the way you're writing Chouji. You're really giving him a lot of personality, and it seems pretty accurate, since we actually don't get a whole lot of him in the manga. Shikamaru's good, too, and I really look forward to amnesia-Ino. Hope you can continue this soon!
my-other-self chapter 1 . 6/24/2004
wow .. im one of shikamaru's fans and i loved ur fic .. please update it soon
kilmorden chapter 1 . 6/24/2004
Hello.

Enjoyed this :) Well written, well paced, the characters seem in character and it looks like an interesting story coming up :) Great!

Have 2 suggestions ;; This :

I guess," Shikamaru said unsurely.

"Unsurely" isn't a great word ;; How about:

"I guess." Shikamaru shrugged.

Instead?

And: Shikamaru amusedly told him,

Again, "amusedly" sounds a little off ; How about:

Shikamaru smiled a little. "...etc"

Anyway, I'm looking forward to finding out what happens next _
Kelly chapter 1 . 6/23/2004
Wow, great story! Please keep up the good work, I would love to read more!
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