Reviews for Memories Hurt
Chaotic Chaos x3 chapter 1 . 7/14/2004
hmm. i have a guess as to who it is... Remus! whoo go me!

tell me if im right. and check out my stories.
Sweet Illusions chapter 1 . 7/13/2004
Aw... Memories are evil sometimes.

It's Remus ne? Do I get a cookie? Do I?
grace is an author chapter 1 . 7/5/2004
Lupin! I should get a cookie by now...*waits* Which reminds me, are you going to continue this?
Wormtail chapter 1 . 6/29/2004
Nicely done, Fee, nicely done. I only have a few thoughts upon it.

First off, you don't want to give everything away all at once. You don't want to nessecarily come out and say who did this, or make it obvious as to who and what you're talking about.

There are a few mistakes - nothing serious, just typos.

Over all, it's good. You might want to give a setting, though.

...May I Beta for you? Please?
Saiko-Neko chapter 1 . 6/27/2004
Dude, That rocked! No wonder you're such a good rper.. :D Kep writing.. lol
Aldawen1 chapter 1 . 6/25/2004
I like very much! Keep up the great work! :)
Werewolf-at-Hogwarts chapter 1 . 6/25/2004
Hey, this is very impressive, especially for your first try. I can see you understand Remus's character very well. I think we can expect great things from you... :) Keep going!