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| 0208 chapter 6 . 8/18/2009
man plss finish this story i REALLY want to know how they will end up!
ok that was childish from me :D
Thanks for writing this story i realy had great time reading this.
| bryant18 chapter 3 . 3/1/2009
what a wall of words man what where you a sleep almost when you wrote that? good chapter
| bryant18 chapter 1 . 3/1/2009
it's a good story just grammaticaly incorect in places
| nightwing27 chapter 3 . 4/13/2008
| nightwing27 chapter 2 . 4/12/2008
| nightwing27 chapter 1 . 4/12/2008
| ace8488 chapter 2 . 11/9/2006
Great Idea, poor exicution. The one thing that really really irced me about your second chapter was your problem with quotes, or rather, your TOTAL AND UTTER REFUSAL TO USE QUOTATION MARKS! this is very sad, and i LIKE motoko keitaro stories. As much as you like giving props to the masters of motoko keitaro fics, you should try to learn from them. try to picture Loss and Redemption if it had no quotation marks. I don't like to flame, but dear god! Not only that, you let it all fall apart, there is very little detail in chapter 2, in some parts it reads like the script for an old play. In otherparts i get totally lost, and have to take a wild guess what in HELL you are trying to say. you have potential, and this is a great story regardless, but that only makes a simple thing like forgetting quotation marks stand out even more. Good luck _
| Dark Wolf 021 chapter 6 . 7/7/2005
good story pleas continue
| PockyGirl of the Phoenix Souls chapter 6 . 7/3/2005
Dont let Naru return, let her end up with Kentaro not Kei.
| TornadoReviewer chapter 6 . 6/18/2005
Exelent uptade!Two thumbs up for describing Motkoko I wonder...what about thinks that 'her sempai' is starting to notice her , no doubt she will soon start to think about Keitaro more she'll even a long/short talk with Motoko about it.
As for Naru...well she should win a one-way ticket to Syberia.
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.
| Dracomon chapter 6 . 6/16/2005
You're getting better. It's been a while since you update anyway the story is good. Keep it up.
| DMage96 chapter 6 . 6/14/2005
great story. i just started to raed it and it is very interesting lol. thank you for writing and good luck. lol _
| TornadoReviewer chapter 3 . 6/4/2005
Another good Keitaro/Motoko fanic!
Motoko seems to be more open than expected but , we all know that she had some feeling for Keitaro tumbs up for the descriptions.
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.
| Matt chapter 4 . 1/2/2005
Sadly, your writing skills leave something to be desired. This is not ment as an insult,still, you need to try and use all the proper marks in their proper places. Mainly for talking. Somewhat hard to read because of your lack of proper grammar. Still, very good story!
Keep it up, and always keep improving. That's what all great authors do, and if your story is any indication, you have great writing potential.
| XC chapter 2 . 12/9/2004
put some talking marks in, its kinda hard to read.