|Reviews for Better Than Jack Part 2|
| diddly day chapter 1 . 6/25/2004
So, this was pretty cool. Uh, did you mean for it to come out in all caps? I found that when I save it as a text, it comes out all weird. It didn't used to. I use html, it comes out better. Also, if you save it as an html, you don't need to indent, and you sould leave a space between each paragraph. I hope that helps. Great story so far.
| Ai-no-Tora chapter 1 . 6/25/2004
Hmm...I tried to read it - some of it was pretty interesting - but if you want, you can try saving it as a .html format after going up to file and clicking Save As. Hopefully that'll keep the original formatting script you wrote it in b/c I've had this problem before. :D Hope you get it fixed soon!