Hi, I'm writing a Smash Bros Odyssey of my own, and just found out about your fic! Respect to the OGs though, I like how this fic is equal part silly and action packed. Just the kind of stuff I wish to go for as I write mine!

Everyone except Peach, Bowser, and Zelda sure seem out of character...

I've read this story from beginning to end, and it interested me a lot. I do have a few points to bring up.

1) GEEZ! Almost anybody outside of Mario's and Link's universes is a general ass to them. And when there's a bit of friendship, they suddenly backstab them for petty reasons. Makes me think their last tournament was just extremely intolerable. I like this, though, and how incredibly broken the trio is and yet suffers through lots of hurdles.

2) I'm kind of disappointed that the genres don't do much justice to the story. There IS a lot of adventure, but there's too little humor and TOO much romance about how hot Link is (and turned into) to the female characters they encounter (which I suspect you're a girl unless I'm wrong). Furthermore, there's a bit too much swearing, even to the story's rating. Those are the only complains I have.

Besides that, I hope you update the story, and I expect to see more humor involved.

NOOOO! Link he kissed samus? The dissappointment! The anger! the killings! And now the blood I must now kill link and samus btw good story

I want to MURDER Link for liking samus. I mean seriously what link did is what you think captain falcon or snake would do! And samus is getting no where near link! Btw I love the story

I just have to say one thing: THE CAKE IS A LIE! sorry I had to btw like the story

Within the last five days of this week, I have been reading this story. Every chapter up to this point. I got to say, I'm damn well impressed. This story was the most FUNNIEST adventure with Mario and Link I have read thus far. It was well worth it to read the submission parts with Ganondorf and Bowser; those we're the most worthwhile out of entire story in my opinion.

I know its been over a few months, so I still do hope you continue this thing to the end. Here's hopping.

You're back! Just as good as ever, I still find myself laughing :] I might actually go and re read the entire story just for fun. I loved Link's response to the Cucco's the most, and the thought of Mario just walking up out of that lake of fire. Final Battle - one for each of them? Brilliant.

I used to follow this story until I hit college and lost track of it. I just caught up to it today and have to say it still holds the awesomeness and charm it always had! Keep up the good work, man! I'm rootin' for you.

What the fu-

And so we begin rolling again!

Aftermath chapters. Annoying, but necessary. Well written, though.

And so come the consequences of link absorbing his darker half, I see.

The commentary from DK, Bowser, and Ganondorf in this chapter was an excellent device to increase the tension.

You know, you've really gotten a hell of a lot better as you've written this. The dialogue, which was simply OK in the beginning is far, far better than it used to be for one.

I'll post a much more lengthy review at the current chapter, but I just wanted to say that this fic is fucking incredible, and it only gets better the further you go.