|Reviews for The Boy Who Was|
| Haha Pseudonym chapter 2 . 11/16/2013
There we go. A proper ending to Peter Pan at last. The ending to that movie has been bugging me for ages. I can definitely say that you have the story justice.
| Lyexicara chapter 2 . 6/4/2009
you have a really good sense of story telling and I really enjoyed this story; the way you wrote the words is incredile. You also didn't have many gramatical errors, unlike some.
| Dorryen Golde chapter 2 . 3/3/2009
Wonderful! I adore your writing style, lighthearted yet profound. I am so glad that Peter grew up (original idea, by the why, the concept of it being the same yet different Peter). I dislike stories in which Wendy returns to Neverland with Peter; according to the movie and book, she wanted to grow up, even if it was a pain sometimes. Besides, the story's much more meaningful with the theme that "to live would be an awfully big adventure".
| Sailor GaOn Donut chapter 2 . 1/6/2007
| HardToScare211 chapter 2 . 9/29/2006
nice job. i disagree, though. I think the ending I would be most satisfied with is wendy going back to neverland with peter...but i liked your story. you're a superb writer. keep up the good work
| WhiteTiger3944 chapter 2 . 10/8/2005
Beautiful! I loved it so much! you defiently have a huge talent for writing! Keep it up!
| Mac chapter 2 . 7/10/2005
I really, really, really enjoyed this... I have always loved the story of Peter Pan, but never liked the ending. It was always the saddest fairytale according to me. I love your writing, and was really excited when I saw that you wrote this one. (p.s. Hurry and update Snow of Ayortha!)
| theKRITIC chapter 2 . 4/10/2005
Love this so much! Great job!
| Uozumi chapter 2 . 9/12/2004
That was so touching. I loved it and it filled me with hope and a sense of happiness.
I love this ending. I had always hoped that Wendy had married someone who was much like Peter.
| tink chapter 2 . 9/12/2004
that was exactly the way i wanted it to end. it was an awesome story!
| Brown Eyes Parker chapter 2 . 9/9/2004
I tried to write a soty like that but my younger sister flipped thanks for doind it for me...cause I hated the end of the (03) movie...
| SweetiePye2332 chapter 2 . 7/15/2004
SUPER! this is the ending I wanted! really great, written just like the original. keep it up!
| Alison chapter 2 . 7/15/2004
Now this is a good ending. I like this alternate ending. Dun duh duh dun! You win the award for having the best story/alternate ending I've read all day! Woohoo! Keep writing, man. You have potential!
| Gandalf the Beige chapter 2 . 7/6/2004
And all will turn... to silver glass.
A light on the water... grey ships pass
into the west.
"Out of the Great Sea to Middle Earth I am come.
In this place I will abide, and my heirs, unto the ending of the world."
In other words: a great fic!
| Philippa chapter 2 . 7/5/2004
So you figured out how to eat your cake and have it too. Peter gets to live, but his legend lives on. Because after all, there is more to Neverland than Peter Pan.
A very nicely conceived ficlet.
And now a plug for myself *sheepish grin.* If you like retold fairy tales, you might want to check out my Rumpelstiltskin retelling. :)