Reviews for Werewolf
MoonBeam2254 chapter 1 . 3/27/2011
Hey, I am just beginning this story and read your other, Bloodsucker. I really like how you write and your ideas.

Just one suggestion. A lot of the time you put "I am" but try putting that together into "I'm" and same with it is.

Only advice I have! Otherwise great!

Check out mine! (Sorry for not being logged in, it wouldn't let me!) D:

Chikifriend chapter 7 . 11/3/2005
Man, Ron is having a REALLY hard time.

Nice how you brought Malfoy back into the picture.

And strange how McGonogall changed. O.O

ANYWAY! malfoy is a potergeist?


Chikifriend chapter 6 . 11/3/2005
So he brought a muggle to Hogwarts, ah?

Poor's all becoming so twisted. And if Fred and George are being sent off to St. Mungos then it means...well, maybe they'll live!


Chikifriend chapter 5 . 11/3/2005

He killed his brothers? That's realistic though, because Werewolves don't recognize anyone at all in their state.

Poor Ron! What a tough time he's been having!

And the brothers...oh my...

AWESOME job! I'm liking!

Chikifriend chapter 4 . 11/3/2005
No one wants to believe him, ah? So sad for Ron...

Better chapter this time, fewer spelling mistakes and grammatical mistakes! I like it.

I wish Ron didn't have to leave tho. Poor guy, getting expelled and all that.

Still, if Harry got bitten, wouldn't he have the same problem?

PLease clarify.

Chikifriend chapter 3 . 11/3/2005
oh gosh!

Harry got bit by a werewolf?

That's not good at all...

Now he'll turn into one too..

what's gonna happen!

Chikifriend chapter 2 . 11/3/2005

Haha, do you have a grudge against Malfoy? I wonder...great twist to the plot tho!'s kinda rushed but still a really awesome idea! i'm enjoying it immensely!

Keep it up,

Chikifriend chapter 1 . 11/3/2005

Scary stuff, Ron being a werewolf.

But I find them jumping to conclusions too quickly already. And Ron could try to act a bit more...inconspicuous.

Very interesting idea tho. I hope that there is a cure. Poor WON WON!

And I just love Snape. You gotta love snape.

Excellent job so far,

linkmaste chapter 15 . 10/13/2005
Great job! This is a great story. Some grammar errors here and there but all in all great!
DryBonesxValley chapter 15 . 10/12/2005
Okay, you liked writing it, and I liked reading it. I'm not insulting the chapters before it, but it overall is the best chapter in the book, and you improved throughout the chapters. Great reading!
DryBonesxValley chapter 14 . 10/8/2005
Still brilliant. We went to the airshow today. The Canadian Snowbirds were awesome, and when do you get to see a flying lawn mower? Not every day.

linkmaste chapter 14 . 10/8/2005
This is good so far. I'm just wondering if Ron is going to become a werewolf again or what?
Linkmaste chapter 1 . 8/11/2005
This is a great story. Some times you had some character OOC but thats alright I tend to do that in my story. Acctually I got instpiried to do the story I have right now. Again great story.
DryBonesxValley chapter 13 . 8/7/2005
It is good, but Wolfsbane doesn't take away the fact that they are werewolves. ANd it doesn't change them back to humans even if they are in wolf form, and you have to drink it in human form for it to have effect. Wolfsbane only takes away the mind of the werewolf, so you have your human mind and the wolf body, so you can still think like a human and be sane...well sane for some people.
DryBonesxValley chapter 11 . 7/24/2005
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