Reviews for Timeslip
Guest chapter 3 . 8/29
haha i just reread this for shits and giggles but beth why did you STOP time travel is like, my kryptonite
FredWeasleysFutureWife chapter 3 . 7/26/2009
Please update soon! this is really good, although I do think they should go to Dumbledore.
blueyblonde chapter 3 . 3/22/2008
i love it
Silver-Entrantress-Elf chapter 3 . 4/1/2005
This is so kool! I will be waiting for an update soon!
Widow's FeatherPen chapter 3 . 9/28/2004
Aika: Umm... very interesting. I'll keep track of the story. . see ya.
Anastace chapter 3 . 8/4/2004
This story intriuges me. Please update soon
Laeni chapter 3 . 8/2/2004
Your story is better than 'grate', it's great! D

Nice. I love the Knitting Needle of Doom thinger.

Am not very coherent right now. Sorry, hun!

Again, though, sometimes simple words work just as well as the not-so-simple.

Nice characterisation, keeping with canon, etc, etc.

Good story all around.

Moo Chapman chapter 3 . 8/2/2004
Yay! New chapter! I really think that this story could be grate, not that I'm noy loving it right now, but the idea it's self is so fan-bloody-tastic that thing that could happen are countless.

Keep writting

Cookie for chapter?

Pandora Moo
Laeni chapter 2 . 7/27/2004
Beth, if you do not update I think I may die ro something. Y'know?

XD Anywhoo, you know I like this and I know I have mroe chapters on my computer somewhere, so I can read those. Just so I don't get cancer, yeah?

*giggle* *hugs you* *hearts this* *has no C&C but try to cut down on the big words because sometimes the simple ones work just as well and aren't as confusing*

kateydidnt chapter 2 . 7/17/2004
good, you posted on FFN. I can keep much better track here than I can on

please update soon!
windswept-stars chapter 2 . 7/13/2004
really good fic! a lot like JKR's style of writing, which makes it smooth and nice t read. this is a HG fic, right? -kiki
11111111111111111111111111111 chapter 2 . 7/1/2004
THIS IS GREAT! POST MORE ASAP! Continue with your exelent work! Post more or else I'll die cause I love this so much!
Nimbirosa chapter 2 . 6/29/2004
A very good start to a story, and a promising looking writing style. Update soon, and sorry I can't do a longer review, butmy mum is currently yelling at me to come to lunch, so toodles!
fuck off already chapter 2 . 6/29/2004
Interesting start. More soon?
AngieGS chapter 2 . 6/29/2004
That is just a big mean cliffie. You have to update soon. Cheers
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