Reviews for Run Away Bride
me chapter 1 . 12/4/2012
Well loved ur story plz i want a sequel aperantly everyone does
blueflower1594 chapter 2 . 8/3/2012
Well, I like your story, but I'm afraid it confused me. If I could please just point out a few things:

1. WHY is Vegeta-sei still there? i'm sorry, but I don't like it when authors just SAY things are different without giving a proper reason.

2. Doesn't this take place before Trunks is born? Then what is 18 and Videl doing in the story? They don't become part of the Z-fighters until after Trunk's birth.

Really, I like your story, and it's greatly improved, but if you could just clear those two issues up for me, I'd grealy appreciate it. :)
lintu-lvr4 chapter 6 . 8/2/2012
Can't wait to see what happens!
KayuraK chapter 6 . 5/2/2011
so where's this sequel? I'm really interested in seeing how this plays out.
Musette Fujiwara chapter 6 . 12/22/2009
Vegeta to the rescue...

how long will it take him to find her...
ForeverDis chapter 6 . 12/7/2009
Aw poor Vegeta! I love this story!
Tammy chapter 2 . 12/7/2009
I like your way of writing and the amount of description you use, but I'm a bit confused about the timeline... If Bulma is (or was a virgin up until a week ago) how come Android 18 is in the wedding?...she already had Trunks by the time the andoids made their appearance in the manga... and well... nevermind the whole King Vegeta and his Queen...

One last thing, I'm pretty sure that Vegeta's planet is called Vegetasei.
DuchessRLR chapter 1 . 11/15/2009
you cant leave the story the way it is! Vegeta has to come tothe rescue or something. please write a sequel or continue the story. :)
ForeverDis chapter 4 . 10/29/2009
Yamcha's a dick!

hehehehe

I love dis story!
nat chapter 1 . 10/22/2009
so sad. please finish soon.
katsumi chapter 1 . 10/17/2009
good luck with the editing... i will wait for it.
Siog Danni chapter 22 . 10/3/2009
This was an absolutely AMAZING story! I wish it were longer. I loved every bit of it! Its definitely one of the BEST VegetaxBulma fanfics i've read to date. I liked the fact that it's not your typical story with Freiza or how Trunks was conceived, it was completely original and I loved how Vegeta was portrayed. I though it was BRILLIANT!
Aishiteru Girl chapter 23 . 9/27/2009
I think before writing a sequel you should really focus on your writing! The style is not so good. In the one sentence you say one thing and in the next there's already another happening.

(it's like:

she's doing this. He's doing that.

The basic idea is good!but you seem to rush through it!)

I couldn't (and didn't want to) follow. Furthermore you should concentrate on details (they are SO important!)

Besides that it's really confusing that vegeta (THE PRINCE OF ALL SAIYANS!) is like: hey whatever onna, let them rape you. *consults the watch*mh well I love you anyway. Doesn't matter that you're a .

yeah right.

And PLEASE don't break sentences in the middle just to make it look like it was longer! It's very irritating and everyone knows what you're doing it for.

I'm not saying everything's bad & I didn't mean to sound harsh or sth. Sorry if I did. It wasn't my intention.

Hope you're not too angry

Have a nice day!

Aishi
Musette Fujiwara chapter 23 . 9/26/2009
I think it's a fabulous idea...
Lolonjn chapter 23 . 9/25/2009
fine by me
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